This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

ok nice abttle yall jus wanna see the pollz and see my crew is doin good....

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Voted For: Wayne

You had great confidence in this battle.....u used good words for the opening but ur closing was weak and needs elevation.....

vote: wayne

Voted For: Wayne

Wayne's shit was actually pretty nice.
Aside from ALL-THE-CAPS and //'s and ~'s and (get it?)'s

With a normal structure, It would be a nice verse.

As for Black, you can just tell he's a newbie from the structure and his set up of punches, in a str8 up mother goose way. But he'll get better.

RTF with an Honest Vote Here.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201559

Voted For: Wayne

Blackfrostbite- i see that you have elevated from your other battles....this battle you had a lil more vocab and you wasn't wit all that gun-play and shit...your punches still need to more structured and your personals well you just need to elevate in that section...but good verse for you




Wayne- your verse was the obvious favorite in this battle...your lines were complex had vocab and multis...your punches were ok...didn't really hit like that...your personals were also ok...but nice verse all around...

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Voted For: Wayne

Wayne won Easily....................................