Still Uppin..........................Stop Pmin me You Pussy Ass lol

I pm'ed you one time... :huh:

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza:

Good verse, original concepts, pretty creative...Punches all connected and hit, which is always a good thing :thumbup:
Structure was good, so flow was on point throughout the entire verse...Wordplay was pretty good, but you need to up your vocab. Overall, a strong verse

DoContinue:

Ok verse from you as well. You weren't that creative though, seeing as your smackdown line and womens tv line were both played as a fuckin sport...Didnt really see any real personals in either verse, so that is something that you both need to work on.

Overall, just elevate in being more creative

V/ Stanza

2ice

Now we still uppin ........................

Voted For: Stanza

lol . . . (thats me still laffing @ the closer great job) Stanza gets my vote because of better punches and wordplay . . his drop was more organized and the structure wa a lot better than DoContinue . . . also the flow was better . . easier to follow . . . but what really got me was the wordplay cause DoContinue's drop seemed basic and elementary and Stanza's took it. . . Overall Stanza . . . NO HATE

Voted For: DoContinue

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME
vs.
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found..
Like Lost internet Connections
^^^
but that internet line is decently played and similies dont hit as hard...
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do had a solid verse even the one i didn't like was still a decent bar.

yo return the fav. link in sig... i wont get this removed if u dont vote cuz im not gay but return one anyway

still uppin ...........................................come on lets get this damn thang closed

Voted For: Stanza

ok . . .
Flow and structure: Stanza took this one cause his flow was easy to follow and rhymes better structure
Wordplay, Meta, all the god stuff: Stanza also gets this because they jsut connected so much better than docontinue's
And my fav. catergory Punches: hands down to stanza no question . . . Overall satnza took this . . No Hate . . .