can i get sum feed pleaze

:cussing: .........................

s'like i reformed a tradition, of hip hop & writin through the years
and if ya wonderin if god exists, be prepared, cause proof is here


OMG, yur not even wack....that bar was kinda slick


then i shown my work to da lord, but he was bored what i wrote
fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road

^i got a fork in the road line...i put in a piece imma drop in the future...but, i like the way yu used it here....

but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance
i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance
i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it

^nyce business right there....and good way to end it.....


well, ma...im impressed....seriously...i havent really looked at yur stuff, but imma be paying closer attention from now on.....ya imagery and vocab was good.epecially in that 1st passage....yu got some skill and mad potential to do damage....i give yu props

lol, it seems the ladies of RV are truly holding it down....I want to collab with yu..and some other of the ladies.......on that matter....

Yea artik ladiez gotta hold it down round here thx fo da feed

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This OM was dope ,.............I never knew You had it in you like that It really made me wonder about sellin ma soul///////LOL nawl im j.k

dope peace though id give it s 9.5/10

nice keep it up gurl you sick !!!!!!!!!!

break yoself^ :shoot: lol.. lemme stop

but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance
i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance
i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it

same what A.P. said, this was nice.. def. ur best OM here
...but keep doin ur thang ma... hopefully i'll see anotha
OM by u that is good as this piece here......... 9/10

real good drop. flow's killa (like everybody's in r.a.w.) but wut really draws me 2 this piece is tha depth of tha content. i can tell u put alot of thought into this 1 and that's wut makes it worth readin. u showed alot of creativity in your lines and really got tha most out of tha concept u used that was possible. i give it a 10 straight up just cuz i enjoyed readin it from top to bottom. rtf.1.

Thx fo da feed...

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I like this. Decent Flow. Nice imagery. Good Approach and Nice concept. I wish you could've went longer though but your piece was so complex and well written. Upp on the vocab much more. Put More Multi'z in it. The best aspect in this piece was the "Imagery" and the Emotion was good, it seems the imagery took over this piece. Well done.

thx fo da feedback