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hahaha.....................^^^yea LOL

this whole thing was ill I liked the vocab and flow it was hella cool keep writing all of u guys..and if this is an audio i'd love to hear it lol..but yeah good stuff keep writing

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Originally Posted by MADDRAPPER

On the club scene as a thug mean hardcore like a submarine
Got potions galore on the oceans floor and got the shores hugged keen
Don’t want enemy ships getting the identity Of my script
Because my quotes don’t float on boats but yet make people trip
It could make a guy panic like the titanic sink his pride for obscenity
Yeah always find whack ID’S in a stack of MC’S headed to my vicinity
Peep clever and heap together some love rap wanna hug
ASAP, so girl your butt is brown and its cut round and snub
Girl I want cake” but MADD I don’t date see you later cuz”
"Aw boo don’t go"

^^^LoL the dumbiest shit I ever saw not the verse the way he posted it in another OM LoL!

I think tha first 2 cats verse was kinda soft, and completely different from tha last 2. I was really feelin Artiks verse. She came wit some nice disses, and punches and what not. I think she shined more in this collab, but then when I seen my nigga Tony's drop...I was feeling it. Only thing is, you started out good, but then you started fallin off on your verse. And at tha end, you put out too many unneccessary metaphores. So, I was thinkin, if you came wit some good fillers to fill in those metaphores, you're verse wouldve been a whole lot better. But, this was a nice collab, no hate to anyone. Tha first 2 heads, ya'll verse was good....Nothing Special, Unquotable Lyrics, mainly because it wasn't interresting. Tha verses were a lil boring. But, I give this collab a 7. Nice shit...And nice teamwork. Keep doin what ya'll do.

Tony, hit me up on PM one more time, and I will do a fresh collab wit you from scratch. I'll hit you up witta good verse, if tha concept is coo.

Keep ya'll heads up!

iight J Dizzy good lookin bout to hit you up!

hey yall hit me up http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202092) can even drop a rhyme if you want

LOL...Tony Green....haha...i didnt even know u was still on this site.....this is Invektive

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artik had an good verse, except it didn't fit with everyone else's piece......and everyone else just had average drops, nothing really too deep......expand your thoughts peeps, get creative; tony, you said mother fucker 5 times in the first 4 lines......widen vocab, deeper thought......and this coulda been dope.

yo this was a nice collabo here amn mad nice yall did it mad good and TG's verse was the best though no offense but yall did good anyways but keep it up wit yall doin aight man but that was hott.......1

good lookin yall Invektive what down didn't even know you was still on this site LoL me and Invektive had a war out of this world LoL and Kesse yeah I was tryinn to get my point across hard witrh the mothafuckers LoL good lookin yo!

uppin to the top!!!!!!!!!!

dat shit is hot ya'll
i like Tony shit Motha Fucka

LooooooL good lookin foe uppin!