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it obviously aint work tho...this is why i stopped texting...
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Voted For: Indeph
You hav a dope verse dropped there.... you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. 7/10 good opening it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. 6/10...i wasnt quite feelin the punch ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. 8/10..nice punch and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . 7/10...good punch I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. 9/10...Alright punch UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say LOL....9/10....nice closure U had preety nice vocab work goin on with aslo some nice punches...opening and closure was preety aiight... Vote:indeph Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: BoneCollector
A'ight...sort of a week battle... Bone...decent punches, nice personals...came pretty hard here...good flow, structure needs some work...Nice wordplay...good verse... Indeph...this was pretty weak...decent punches but nothin spectacular...Structure was a'ight...flow was good...wordplay was decent....but overall you didn't come as hard as Bone Collector in this one... No hate. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: BoneCollector
BoneCollector: You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............ Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" ^^decent opener, good punches. 7/10 Bone is endin' his saga,......nothin' will stop my rage,not even johovah ....or even allah Cuz I wouldnt feel the "full strength of *LA*" If I was "caught in shoot outs In major cities of california".. ^^set up was wack, punch was ok 5/10 .........................Im trickin' you, making indeph think he can compete with me, ill end this faker.... Provin' I can out skill and out smart this fag,and really "Con-Verse" like "retro basketball players"*... ^^decent personal. Ok set up 6/10 I end lifes quick, your easy bitch,i've face much harder opponets then this kid...You'll be hidin' behind shutters... No one feels your rhymes,So i'll disect your body and have you really "Indeph/Depth",when your "6 Feet Under"... ^^good nameplay, good punches. 8/10 Im fast with raps...everyone could blast your crap.....so after this ill pop my collah...... Cuz when people dress with "Dull Colors" is the only time we "Feelin BLA(Blah)*" ^^another good personal. OK Bar. 7/10 Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' ^^decent closer, could have been better 5/10 Overall: 38/60 (63%) Indeph: you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. ^^dope opener good personal 8/10 it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. ^^funny bar 7/10 ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. ^^ehh ok 5/10 and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . ^^not feeling it much 5/10 I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. ^^decent bar 5/10 UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say. ^^lol dope closer, good bar 8/10 Overall: 38/60 (63%) Well its a tie by that way of voting, so ill continue. Personals: BC Punches: Tie Structure: In Flow: In Meta's: BC Multies: Tie Enjoyed More: BC I gotta say BC edged this one out and probably because his personals were a bit more effective than indephs. But really close battle, could go either way. Please return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig or this vote will get removed. I have to go with BC |
Voted For: BoneCollector
you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. AIGHT.... it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. NOT FEELIN THAT..... ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. NICEEEE... and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . NAH.... I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. GOOD... UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say. LOL NICEEE FINSHER 7.5/10 A LOT OF NICE PUNCHES BUT STILL A LOT OF JUST AIGHT PUNCHES!!!! VS You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............ Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" GOOD Bone is endin' his saga,......nothin' will stop my rage,not even johovah ....or even allah Cuz I wouldnt feel the "full strength of *LA*" If I was "caught in shoot outs In major cities of california".. NICCCEEEE .........................Im trickin' you, making indeph think he can compete with me, ill end this faker.... Provin' I can out skill and out smart this fag,and really "Con-Verse" like "retro basketball players"*... AIGHT... I end lifes quick, your easy bitch,i've face much harder opponets then this kid...You'll be hidin' behind shutters... No one feels your rhymes,So i'll disect your body and have you really "Indeph/Depth",when your "6 Feet Under"... DOPE... Im fast with raps...everyone could blast your crap.....so after this ill pop my collah...... Cuz when people dress with "Dull Colors" is the only time we "Feelin BLA(Blah)*" TITE DAWG.... Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' FUCK TITE FINSHER!!!! 8.5/10 LOADZ OF REALLY DOPE AND TITE PUNHCES!!!!NICE VERSE V/BONECOLLECTOR FOR HAVIN ALOT MORE BETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS IN HIS VERSE!!!! |
Voted For: BoneCollector
return the favor honestly here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201879 aight nice drop guys bc got this one because his punches where hard and he had numerous personals in there indeph u had personals and punches but they need to be harder and connect better nice drop return the favor here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201879 |
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