lol sure.. haha and u keep getting my name wrong lol its RILE1

Who cares.....Shit.........

haha I dont lol...but yeah upping for feedback peeps....

upping for more feedback come on people

I liked this one more than the other ones... Still doing your thing with the imagery and story... I liked this one, intertaining... i didnt mind readin it, lol...

check out "Defying The Odds" in my sig...

ok I did already lol more feedback please

upping this for more feedback come on folks

dang u guys...upping this peeps

awwwww come on ppl can i please get some feedback

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202674

upping this...come on people leave some feedback

shit was off the hook homey nice story telling captured m eon this one

cool thanks man...hopefully I can get some more feedback lol

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202958

upping this..... u people need to leave some damn feedback

i liked this a lot man props to you :thumbsup: EXELLENT flow man i loved it structure nothing to complain about.....Up ya vocab a bit but ur story telling and imagery blew all of that away very good man..keep elavating 8/10 rtf if u can on any of my oms

ok thanks man...hopefully now ppl will start feedbacking lol