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Juss Nyce 07-29-05 04:03 PM

Voted For: BoneCollector

This was a pretty tight battle but Bc...to me came alot hard..

BoneCollector
Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya...
Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...!
Damn ..Nice opener
Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range.
And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change".
Ha..good punch..nice meta
Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame....
My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games".
Hah..nice meta
Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?*
Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf...
Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..!
Damn..loving this
Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion..
Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!*
Ahh..decent
You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz
Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t)..
LOL..nice closer

Troop
Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector
You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is
Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector
Pretty good opener
And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot
His Old Names Angel
So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop
Ha..decent
Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies
But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of.
Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies
LOL!..this was tight
If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track
If He Smacked a Chick
That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back
Naw..played
And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation
Ya Punches Are as Useless
As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation
LOL!nice closer

Overall Pretty good battle it was very close but ima have to give this one To Bc... good battle to both and both keep it up

MaRVJay 07-29-05 05:38 PM

Voted For: BoneCollector

t.r.oo.p
Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector
You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is
Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector
^^^I LIKED YA RYHME SCHEM BUT I REALLY DIDN'T GET DA PUNCH
And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot
His Old Names Angel
So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop
^^^OKAY..GOOD PERSONAL
Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies
But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of.
Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies
^^DECENT
If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track
If He Smacked a Chick
That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back
^^^LOL..WHUT???
And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation
Ya Punches Are as Useless
As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation
^^DECENT CLOSER....

U REALLY DIDN'T HAVE NO OOHHH BAR'S BUT YA SHIT WAS OKAY BUT A FEW O F YA LINES I DIDN'T GET

b.c:
Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya...
Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...!
^^^^LOL..GOOD OPENER..& VERY ORIGINAL
Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range.
And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change".
^^^NAH...U WORDED DIS FUCKED UP
Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame....
My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games".
^^^DECENT PERSONAL...COULD OF MADE IT BETTA THO
Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?*
Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf...
Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..!
^^^NOTHIN SPECIAL
Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion..
Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!*
^^^LOL...
You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz
Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t)..
^^^^NAH.....

DIS WAS KIND OF A CLOSE BATTLE...CUZZ BOTH WEREN'T REALLY DAT SPECTACULAR BUT BOEN CAME WITH LIKE 2 HOTT LIENS AND TROOP ALL UR'S WERE REGULAR NOTHIN MADD SAY OOOH LIKE I SAID


RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL

~Luciano~ 07-30-05 02:29 PM

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Macreep 07-30-05 05:03 PM

Voted For: BoneCollector

Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector
You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is
Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector
^^^punch was weak as fuck
And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot
His Old Names Angel
So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop
^^OK.........
Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies
But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of.
Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies
^^Nice...........
If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track
If He Smacked a Chick
That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back
^^OK...........
And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation
Ya Punches Are as Useless
As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation
^^bah....a lil played

Nice verse.One whack punch which was the opener...and one played..which was the closer.But the rest was good.I think a lil more harder personals would have been better though.Had a couple a personals..but they were weak.

Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya...
Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...!
^^^OK........
Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range.
And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change".
^^OK........
Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame....
My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games".
^^OK......
Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?*
Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf...
Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..!
^^a lil long....but ight
Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion..
Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!*
^^Lmao...dope personal
You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz
Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t)..
^^OK......

This was a NIce verse.Not one bad bar for me.The best line was the personal about his sig.But a problem I see between you and troop...is the basic rhyme sheme.But I think you edged him for being more consistant

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