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Voted For: one mic

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
^^coulda made sumtin better of the OM..4/10
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
^^multi shoulda match sllyably,n punch was meh..4/10
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
^^u didn't play of the OM..n punch was weak...3/10
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile
^^^basic....2/10

I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth
^^stupuid...2/10
When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO
But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow
^^not much of a punch..1/10
Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT
Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot
^^set-up horrible n punch was shit..2/10
You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter
Will that movie make you act somewhat harder?
^^WTF?....2/10
I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK
Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep
^^no punch...2/10

Ok..this battle goes to open mic due to actually having a punch in every bar.Mike was just sayin shit outta nowhere and a lot of his lines weren't punches.

Vote-Open Mic
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yo thanx man appreciate it. uppin this....................

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Voted For: one mic

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=204757
RTF HERE or vote will be REMOVED, Werrd...


One Mic got this

far better punchlines, Mikes verse was way too complex, nothin caught my eye in your verse Mike, Wordplay wasnt ehere an neither was the nice disses.

One mic, ya had some aight stuff, more complex feel too ya verse, puns hit harder, wordplay was far more creative, on the whole ya verse was alot nicer, not much more i can say really

One mic got this for havin an overall better verse

RTF One mic.

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Voted For: one mic

cuz hes alright. and he has what it takes to be one of the best like ME!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, appreciate it. uppin this, jus' 1 more vote.........

This was feedback posted for one mic
 

you got him even though you kinda fell off towrds the end

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