You lucky I was goin to vote for you E-RAY-Sir..............

wow.


this battle threads a mess..lolol.
thanks for clarifiying that macreep.

upping for more votes.

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Voted For: E-Ray-Sir

both verses was indeed weak
but i got ta choose sum1
E-Ray u came in kinda of lame by say hello so do dat again
u rhymed but did have a few good punches so dats
all i got ta say and u made mo sense

Unrest- yo shit was weak u shouldnt neva rushed through dat shit cuz it couldda been beta

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Voted For: E-Ray-Sir

E-Ray-Sir:

ok let me set this off with a hello..now that I got that out a the way
why you gotta try be smart? you couldnt be "bright" if your name was "day"
^^decent meta, set up was retarded though 5/10
by the way theres nothing unrestricted about being limited in skill
kids rhymes seem dead and run down like week old road kills
^^ok bar not too great 4/10
never the less...I can still sever the best...with a clever contest
This is a dim day for restricted like the weathers a mess
^^good multies, perfect flow, ok meta 8/10
So how bout we leave it on a positive rhyme
cause youll never transform from wak to dope even if you were optimis prime.
^^good meta ok closer 6/10

Overall: 23/40 (58%)


Unrestricted:

ok,bout to fry this noob named E-Ray, but no need to call me sir
jus becuz u see wat u wana be ertime i look in the mirror
^^ehh that was kinda gay 3/10
ill put u in the dirt like i was a farmer and u was a seed
and then ill pluck ur ass out like a worthless weed
^^no 2/10
accepting this battle means u really dont care bout ur record
cuz ur bout to have a loss on it in a very quick second
^^no 2/10
u suck, u wouldnt have props if u was a stage play
like the d.c. arsonist, ill "fry" u anyday
^^decent 4/10

Overall: 11/40 (28%)


Vote: E-Ray-Sir


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Voted For: E-Ray-Sir

Good battle ya'll...

Battle breakdown

Multis-E Ray Sir
punches=E Ray Sir
personals=E Ray Sir
Complexity-E Ray Sir
Vocab- E Ray Sir
structure- E Ray Sir
Wordplay-E Ray

Overall, pretty decent battle..but i'm agreeing with unrestricted.....Ray came out in the first 2 lines swinging hard

Unrestricted...you went first, so i know how that feels......you came half-way decent

VoTE= E Ray Sir

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