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This was feedback posted for Nino Brown
 

I can't Vote cuz Im too knew to the game and dont have enough posts.. but Nino whipped this fools ass..
Honestly.. Gangrene had no real punchlines.. flow wasnt there for me.. and i know every person reading this shit has no clue what movie hes trying to sell.. Nino i'd vote you for this one..

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Voted For: Nino Brown

you win, tko no hate to gangrene structure wwas better.....multis and everything was better......so my v/nino brown

return the favor on my o/m Masked Disguise

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Voted For: Nino Brown


I seen ya Last Battle.....Gangs You's a Lame
If i said u Was Sick
...I would only be Reffering 2 your User Name
^^^dat sopposed to be a diss?
Heres a Pointer..Punches. what ya Rhyme Lacks
Tapeing Presents..with 1 Hand
Was the Last time u Had a Battle Under Wraps
^^flowed horiibly and whack
I kinda Guessin your a Fag.So skip ya Gay Rules
Cuz im Over ya Head Like Babies In Wave Pools
^^played.....
Your Booty Allready..So u dont need Wack off Flix
But Saying u Won this
Is Ludacris..Like Doctor Phill Givein Weight Loss Tips
^^Uncreative....

Need to upp your creativity up...Structure was good.But flow was bad.1st. bar....how is callin his user name a diss?2nd..was just whack.3rd and 4th were played as fuck.Get some wordplay and such.

The real Nino was a G, this nigga str8 ass B,
Nino sold crack, he only seen crack is when his lips is ashy,
^^well....he neva said he sold crack..so fake personal or just a generic diss
Another RV actor, he weak, and the facts jus be,
That his raps just weak, like crackhead teeth,
^^flowed bad....but punch was ight....
U from New Jack City, he jus like me, a newB,
Callin himself Nino, naw this nigga more like Pookie.
^^WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS!?!

Ok...if you had a decent punch for that last bar...then you woulda won this.But that was the whackest line in this battle.Ya had flow and ya had structure...but nothing else aside from it.Work on metas and wordplay.

Vote-Nino
RTF
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