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Macreep 07-30-05 02:47 PM

^^OK.....so wat if I put 2 K-trini verse......would you like me to remove one...if it bothers you so bad?

Nynth Degree 07-30-05 03:03 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Spektikul
Macreep...

Nobody Likes You...:thumbup:

(^thats sigabble ppl^)

That's not siggable, that's old news! :)

Macreep 07-30-05 03:06 PM

^^That coming from someone who got props in my tutorial ?HUH 9th?

Nynth Degree 07-30-05 03:11 PM

Lol so what? Woohoo, I got props in a tutorial...you know why? Because it was a creative verse.

Macreep 07-30-05 03:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 9th Degree
Lol so what? Woohoo, I got props in a tutorial...you know why? Because it was a creative verse.



Yeah it was....now stop dissing me every chance you get.I don't know wat your problem with me is.

∆ P E X X 07-30-05 03:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Macreep

SOme dope lines to leave you with

Black Queen and cheddar's a myth,like stories about the moon
And this battle was neva tided/tied,liked the ocean at noon
Shaving her pussy is the only time a day she gets a raze/raise
Trappin her d/r's in a net is how she gets a catch phrase/praise
But somehow,her crew whack ass crew of fags stay the most wet
And I swear,she must be a bad model
.................................................. .....way she fails to 'pose' a threat!!!!!
I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste
Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste
-K-trini vs Black Queen

think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…
-Daz vs E.C.

Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
-9th degree vs Jack the Ripper


Where's the dope lines? Those pieces that you show as examples are AAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. Only on RV woulda 1syl rhymescheme still be hot. That shit went out in 1989. The wordplay in the last verse was straight up . And I'm saying this because there's way iller shit out there than any of this, lol, bu this got chosen as the "examples". smh....

Nynth Degree 07-30-05 03:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Doomsday
Only on RV woulda 1syl rhymescheme still be hot. That shit went out in 1989.

Word to this.
Quote:
The wordplay in the last verse was straight up . And I'm saying this because there's way iller shit out there than any of this, lol, bu this got chosen as the "examples". smh....

Lol it's just where RV is at this point. Yeah I can see flaws in my verse, and I realize there's way better shit out there. But if you compare it to the rest of RV, well...it gives them a goal to shoot for.

∆ P E X X 07-30-05 03:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 9th Degree
Word to this.

Lol it's just where RV is at this point. Yeah I can see flaws in my verse, and I realize there's way better shit out there. But if you compare it to the rest of RV, well...it gives them a goal to shoot for.


Damn son, that's some low-ass aspirations if that's what dudes here shoudl be aiming at. weren't you KORV at one point or another? And that's what you're fuckin with man? Damn son. I just died a little inside.

Nynth Degree 07-30-05 03:49 PM

I still am KORV, until the next tourney. But yeah, wasn't my best though.

Macreep 07-30-05 03:49 PM

ok........but can you give me some dope verses from this site to put?

and doomsday...that shit was nessersary.u said that shit solely to bash me
or to be funny.

Sixth Sense 07-30-05 04:05 PM

yo how do u get abnned from being k-trini.......lol

Macreep 07-30-05 04:06 PM

^^huh?????............

Germ 07-30-05 04:08 PM

lmlo at k-trini recycling garbage lines

I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste
Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste
-K-trini vs Black Queen

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197357

/hahahahahhaha, macreep is soOOOoOoOo good at text :rolleyes:

Macreep 07-30-05 04:12 PM

^^wat ya mean recycling....that ain't recyling..I said at bottom I used it against black queen in a battle

Sixth Sense 07-30-05 04:13 PM

^^werd hes so good man werd......lol......sike........


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