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This was feedback posted for Daubs
daubs fuckin owned this shit, ya hear.........word
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Voted For: Daubs
Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol.. Theorietically speaking.. Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!! - Ooo Ok I like your wordplay, decent bar. Good Punch w/ a personal. Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it.. And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet.. - Meh...Ok Punch, didnt felt this was A decent bar though. Ok Punch. Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers.. & RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears.. - Ok punch on the 1st Line. I like the 2nd Line though good wordplay and a punch. You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen.. Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician.. - I like the personal Punch... Overall- It was a good verse you had 3 bars of good punches and wordplays and far most Good Personals. Nicly done. all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load - Ahh I like this bar good Punch crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book - Nice Punch, and Good Concept. leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam* ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne - Meh, I like the Personal. The Punch was ok, could've been better. deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel -I like the personal and the Punch. Overall- You had a good verse, Punches were Good not decent but good. I like the 1st bar,and the 2nd bar. Conclusion- Ok...My vote goes to Daubs, he had a good Punches with them Wordplays there. Mac you had a nice verse, cool personals also but I think with daubs Wordplays w/ Punches edge it a little. So my vote goes to Daubs. Please Return a favor in my battle with Black~Magic or Lady fiya's thank you Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Macreep
yo imma go wit Macreep in this one... Hispersonals hit hell hard..... (note* I checked them all*........ my favorite line b Macreep was: cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel *HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left ^^ that was tight... Daubs was tite to and he had some good punches..but i did'nt fell em... and they was'nt no personals inmy opinion..... but both emcees keep at it my vote goes to Macreep Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Daubs
Wordplay-- Daubs. The sue-is idol line was nice but he got it with the pie-in-ears. Punchlines-- Daubs. He took this when he said "And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet." Personals-- Macreep. He simply came with more personals. But, I am not big on personals. Macreep's personals didn't really grab my attention. Vote-- Daubs Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^hah....vote is hate and getting removed............
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WTF, stop removing em, i whored you........ again.......
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Voted For: Daubs
DAUBS Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol.. Theorietically speaking.. Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!! HIT HARD^ Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it.. And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet.. VERY NICE PLAY OFF HIS NAME^ Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers.. & RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears.. SELF-GLORIFIED/NO PUNCH^ You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen.. Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician.. STILL SELF-GLORFIED/WEAKER PUNCH^ Daubs, I gotts hand it to ya man, you had a few really dope punches and name play in the first 2 bars, after that you started to fall off. And you said that if we dont get the wordplay to PM you or dont vote...well in your last 2 bars I can clearly see the wordplay and I thought it was not bad, except for the fact that it was half self-glorifying and half not hitting your opponent...Ima have to go ahead and give you a 5/10 for half of your verse being dope man, no beef, were homies. MACREEP all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load OK WORDPLAY^ crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book OK...KINDA PLAYED^ leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam* ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne WEAK^ deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel WEAK^ Mac, well I guess yours was not bad...but to be honest I wasnt really feelin it. I mean, you claim to have personals in every bar, I look and yes there are...but, all you really did was state a minor fact about him in half of the first bar and then the rest was crap and didnt really go with the personal you picked. Here, lets take a look at your personals: -All his battles are 6 lines SO WHAT -Crying his ass off like a chick YOU DIDNT PLAY OFF THAT -Cause your leader ez left NO PUNCH OFF THAT -Denys label of geek WTF -Cause he be here all day postin a lot YOU POST MORE THAN HE DOES, WEAK PERSONAL NONE THE LESS You see...ya cant just go stating minor personals at the start of your lines and then not play off them like that, shits wack. Ill give you this much tho, you did have some good wordplay in there...and for that I will generously give you a 3.5/10 V/DAUBS.................................... |
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Yeah thanks for the vote, and for thew feed.
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