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chip 07-31-05 03:08 PM

good lookin' on checkin' out my self introduction. sick u got a sick flow! i'll be sure to look for your new ones.

Sick. 07-31-05 04:47 PM

thanks for the love chip... keep it up kids

Sick. 07-31-05 06:42 PM

uppin for feed...

Sick. 07-31-05 07:45 PM

uppin ..........

taz 08-01-05 01:48 AM

wow man i felt this......tight shit....ill try and see if i can and persue these people into nominating you..if not write more stuff like this and you will definitley make it..my advice to you take more time and use bigger vocabulary it will make your piece more enjoyable to read this piece right hurr was perfrectly structured aok emotion and pretty damn good rhyme sceme i say keep it up man........and return the favor...and remember vocabulary is they key...iight mayne im out rtf

Sick. 08-01-05 04:34 PM

thanks man feelin the love... uppin for feed

Sick. 08-02-05 03:32 PM

uppin...........

*Bad Newz* 08-02-05 03:56 PM

I chuckeld at the end of this
I like the picture you panited with your verse I enjooyed this peice
and your vocab was good....\

heres the breakdown

Flow:9/10
structure:10/10
punches: 10/10


nice drop

Sick. 08-02-05 04:11 PM

thanks man.. uppin for some more of this

MADDRAPPER 08-02-05 05:59 PM

Well Likke Di Told You Its Not A Good Rap But Good For The Soft Asses On This Site Hell These Fuck Scared To Show Attitude Well This Is Good For Poetry Heads Only Kid

Sick. 08-02-05 08:40 PM

oh yah.. ill drop it on audio when i get around to it.. just for you maddrapper :thumbup: and then well see if its just poetry

Sick. 08-02-05 10:05 PM

upppinggg......

Sick. 08-03-05 11:36 AM

keep the feedback comin

snipes 08-03-05 11:58 AM

nice drop kind a funny

Sick. 08-03-05 12:15 PM

that was some bullshit feed... dont just post to get ur number of posts up....
if you want to give feedback ACTUALLY GIVE FEEDBACK.. rookies upset me lol


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