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PrahJect 10-26-05 06:58 AM

Voted For: Souljah

Smite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited
Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited
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LOL nice opener, humorous, flowed, multis, good punch...

Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill
Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill"
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OHH dayumm this was a dope line...liked it...nice wirdplay...aint heard from u in tyme

Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit
If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit"
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Nah sorry dawg...set up was ok...punch nah...wasnt feelin that one...seems too forced..

I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black
Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!!
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Ayo well I dont like K Trin too much but you cant diss another cat when u aint battlin him so I cant really give u anythin for that verse

Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow
With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show.......
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Weak closer...ure ish started off dope..fell off a lil..this was a lil better

6.5/10

Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him
Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in
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Nah dawg flow was good...punch not...keep at it

Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip
Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips
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LOL i iked this one...lol..nice punch...flow good...punch good

Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick
Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit
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Nah man I aint feelin that...whats the punch....:|

Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal
U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel
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WHAT??>..Thats so weakk...dawg yo step that up...ferris wheel>>>...thas not a punch

This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin
Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin*
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U starred it but you didnt say why it was there...so its got flow..but no punch from what i see

Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin
Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin
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Ok u got a personal but I didnt know drk and tizzle were like buddies or what not...but no

Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit
im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~
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HOMIE..up ure vocab..up ure punches..more personals..flow and structure was good

4/10


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