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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
Flow - Tie, Both had jacked up structure hard to catch a good flow Punches - Coldsteel had a few better punches, six sense had some 2 but coldsteels stood up more Personals - Coldsteel, had some nice personals that caught my eye.....six sense had some played personals..no hate Multies - Tie, becuz didnt see any multies from either...sry guys Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses v/coldsteel...................RTF on the battle in my link or this vote will disqualified |
Voted For: ColdSTEEL
Flow - Tie, Both had jacked up structure hard to catch a good flow Punches - Coldsteel had a few better punches, six sense had some 2 but coldsteels stood up more Personals - Coldsteel, had some nice personals that caught my eye.....six sense had some played personals..no hate Multies - Tie, becuz didnt see any multies from either...sry guys Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses v/coldsteel...................RTF on the battle in my link or this vote will disqualified |
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Voted For: Sixth Sense
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
coldSTEEL, u cant hurt me, the only bars u got are from Hershey’s Cuz u have bitten rhymes.............. .............ur too fat, I say Thanksgiving and he goes for the turkey ^^set-up played as fuck and punch weak..2/10 Ur verses are boring like text wit laughin gas makes the voters go to sleep That’s must be his technique, cuz the wins he got were......all very cheap ^^lyrics put you to sleep?..cheap?...1/10 Kid u need to relax, cuz those made-up stories aren’t goin to stack Steel put ur face in the encyclopedia cuz really u need to face the facts ^^MEh...your best punch...so....4/10 Weak verse here.Structure was good.Flow was ight.Punches sucked ass.1st bar..set-up was played.I mean...you didn't think HErshey bar/rap bars was gonna be creative did you?and the punch sucked.MUsic put you to sleep...horrible concept..c;mon.That last line was your best and that wasn't even all that good. Drop a line against me?..YOu gotta be a bit-dense. Your rhymes are chump change,They only add up ta six cents.(Sixth sense.) ^^forced multi..punch coulda been better..but wordplay is wordplay...5/10 Okay.."you did swell.",but coldsteel?.."My lead~lethal!" So accept leavin wit a"Big L"..Cuz thats gonna b tha only time you see dead~people. ^^Nice wordplay again..but drop the "~"......6/10 Why?..cuz your lackin and Im relentless Fo' real! He changed accounts ,cuz The punches ur packin got voters losin tha sense's they feel! ^^flowed bad...and punch was weaker than the rest..3/10 Triple 6?...I guess you wanna spit fire like a demon! Shouldve called you whirl pool....They way you like swallowin sea~men! ^^PLayed wordplay here..2/10 Ive won this battle..esp. with this last round! Cuz its sorta like playin poker wit a parapeligic..I got this Hands down! ^^OK......4/10 More lines than sixth sense...so that gives you a clear adavntage here.Flow was a lil choppy at times and structure was lacking.But I liked the punches.What you had over sixth sense was you used wordplay.HAd some played ones though....like sea-men/semen.But overall...you verse had more to offer. Vote-COldsteel RTF below please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256 |
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how many times did that dead people concept been used.....lol.....
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yea boi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
damn.......again damn--lol . . . Personal: Coold Steel Structure: understod cold steel short long, but kinda was feeling sense Wordplay, flow . . . everything else: cold steel I don't think i have to explain anything really i thought cold steel took this one hard hitting punches . . put together well . . . i would say whats my fav. line just can't pick one right now cause every other one was a diss. .. lol . . good luck and great job . . no hate... keep wiriting . . PEACE |
all the votes here arent even explained fully......so i think they all shuld be DQued jus checkem.......
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