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This was feedback posted for @.
You lost kid. now proceed to shut your mouth :bored:
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This was feedback posted for @.
Lmfao. O my god my sides hurt. Ow.................
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wtf is this?..............d/r........................
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omg.
dr?? you balaintantly lost...your really that fucking stupid huh? |
Wow at him saying DR when I didn't even vote. How retarded.
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Voted For: @.
Well... Its rather even... so heres the break down... Imma do it bar by bar breakdown.. soo plain and simple.. its gonna be Bar1= shit like that.. MACREEP= Bar1 = meh alright opener.. nothin special.. the fantasy part wasnt amazing but it was alright 6/10 Bar2 = ummm.... nothin special.. nothin amazing.. im sorry.. its kinda weak... 5/10 Bar3 = its goin downhill... stop with the weak try n play on words... it doesnt work well when your repeating and repeating.... 5/10 Bar4 = weak closer.... wow moderator.. pretty weak concept im sorry.. 5/10.. Soo outta 40 you get 21... which is basically just over 50%.... Plain and simple stop with the alternate word meaning shit.. its weak wordplay and you dont use it correctly... its not that good..... Your personals.. LACKING... your HARD punches... LACKING... plain and simple the battle skill in this 8 lines was LACKING..... @. Bar1 = not a bad opener... the holding ur thoughts part.. kinda played.. sorry... 7/10 Bar2 = Its alright.. the first line.. not that good... nothin special.. 2nd line better play on the word.... overall better line... 7/10 Bar3 = Hmm WEAK... sorry.. it just doesnt work.. the whole wack thing.. played as fuck.. the first line... sorry.. weak as well.. this was a weak bar.... 4/10 Bar4 = ITs alright... too bad u used ur mod powers to change what he said.. plain and simple that shit gets u a 3/10 on this... because its a faulty personal... and really the whole link rhymescheme with the actual link = weak now.. SOO outta 40 you get 21 hmm tied with points and percentages... THOUGH... you shall be granted the win... on the basis you had better punches. than macreep... Sooo winner.. in this close battle.. which was CLEARLY lacking in all categories... goes to @. aka Ysdat.. STEP UP... this is for an IP ban.. i expected something amazing... this is sub-par... |
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yeh, i never done text so .......... Im srickly topical. thanks for the vote. |
This was feedback posted for Macreep
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This was feedback posted for @.
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This was feedback posted for @.
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Voted For: @.
wow this was very one sided @ u merked him mad good u had way better pinches and everythin basicly way better u got this for sure the closer with the link.....lol.....now thats funny.....lol......very creative man liked it alot and the personals were mad good too......ma didnt have enuff of it so he dont get tha vote u need to elevate alot man but my v/ goes to @ for havin a better vote...... . . . . . PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES IN MY SIG..... |
can yall hurry up and close this shit
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Voted For: @.
Yo Believe it Or not this was almost a tight battle, Unlike what i thought it was going to be. But @ Came with the Harder Punches, and he had the Better Punches, Aswell Better Flow and Structure.. Macreep Yah Verse wasnt that bad, But It wasnt good Enough to Take the Win.. Yah structure was fucked.. And Yah Flow fell off at points, You had some aight Punches.. And for what personals you had were pretty weak.. |
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