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Rile1 08-04-05 02:32 PM

^^ hella unexplained vote man.....upping this cuz no one ever frikkin votes

*Bad Newz* 08-04-05 02:40 PM

Voted For: Rile1

okay okay.........decent battle...

Rile1: you're lins were funny to me....and your multis were'nt forced either and they went togather really well your punches were mediocre...but your personals fell into place and made up for that...structre was good to

Wayne: speaking of structre yours completely sucked......man your shit was everywhere...but you had multi's but you were doing more self glorafication than anything fam...you were'nt punching Rile1 at all...

my vote goes to Rile1

both emcees keep ya head up

RTF tha favor in my sig or this vote will be removed....i mean it....

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

*Nice* 08-05-05 10:13 AM

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*Nice* 08-05-05 03:25 PM

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Rile1 08-05-05 06:59 PM

omfg why odnt people vote man?? so stupid..vote dammit!!!

Rile1 08-06-05 01:15 AM

fuck dude.....can u people please vote!!! omfg Fl is dead over here too?? lol

Rile1 08-07-05 09:26 PM

dude why dont people frikking vote on here? I swear to god I vote so much and never get voted back..wtf?

noname 08-07-05 09:36 PM

Voted For: Rile1

I'm tha "serial killa" of dis *RAP SHIT*, leavin niggaz in "*CASKETS*", wut u kno about triggaz and *GAT SLIPS* when u ain't *CAP SHIT*::Ya shit's *PLASTIC*, ma shit's tha "grade-A-quality"
I'm spittin bars so hot Nas and "J(Jay-Z)-wanna- follow-me"::
You don't need a "life"boat ta float *ontop-of-tha-water* (dead bodies float)::
I'm like Powerpuff Girl blankets, cuz I'm *ontop-of-ya-daughter*::
I'm a P.I.M.P. and *I love it*::
Spell it backwards (P.M.I.P.) and dat's u, 'P'ussy 'M'asturbatin *'I'n 'P'ublic*::
I'm straight *BUCKIN' CATS*, and u about ta be tha next *CHUMP I CAP*::
Even "ur boys" were like "Rile1......who tha *FUCK IS DAT*?"::
Good *LUCK IN RAP*, cuz believe me it's *needed*::
Ain't no way you're beatin me nigga, cuz I'm *undefeated*::I got u *SLITTIN' YA WRISTS* cuz I got INFAMOUS SPITZ* dat's *GITTIN YA PISSED* like Ike while *HITTIN HIS BITCH* (Tina Turner's husband, Ike abused her)::You're *WISHIN' YOU'RE SICK*, but ain't no way u *WINNIN' DIS SHIT

Ok...next time...fix your structure.I can't break down your verse because of it.Write it like how Rile1 wrote it.Stop with all the ("),(*), and Capiltal words outta no-where.And 2nd..you seem to just be saying shit just because it rhymed.Work on your punches.You had too much self-glorifing.And your still rapping about Tina Turner's husband and MAsterbation?..C'mon...get creativitie.

omfg why did I even battle u, ur fake, and ur stupid, u wanna sue?
cuz when pigs can fly..just is the time u will make "ima king" true
^^when pigs fly?...played since the 80's.
what are u gonna do? ur homeless now and always smokin bongs
so saying Detroit stand up, just proves crowds dont like ur songs
^^OK.....4/10
I have to touch u with tongs, ur dirty as hell, bitch getta damn job
dude u only open up a can of worms....to eat them ya nasty slob
^^No punch..so what if he nasty?....2/10
no time to rob banks man u need to work on the voice u rap with
so I get high like the guy in ur avvy........so I cant listen to ur shit
^^meh...coulda been better....2/10
fuck this bitch, he cant maintain the right attitude,so he gets pain
when u come out of the blue....I catch a fat whale named Wayne
^^Ok......3/10
hear the rain? gosh im done now and now u lost, u should know
Waynes world is confusing and stupid..just like the fucked show
^^OK......3/10

A buch of mediocre punches here.You had structure and flow.WAAAAY ahead of Wayne's.But some of your lines sucked.Like that pigs fly one.Reason you gettin my vote is because of punches and personals with no self glorifing.But next time...step it up a bit.

Vote-Rile 1
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256
^^c'mon..this was a long battle...return the favor...

Rile1 08-08-05 08:21 AM

^^ yeah Ill hit that up...but I guess no one understands witty punches lol

*Nice* 08-09-05 10:44 AM

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Rile1 08-10-05 12:23 AM

OMFG why cant u people vote on this but u can on other battles? lol

Rile1 08-11-05 01:29 PM

wow..... if u ppl would vote I would return an honest one but whenever I vote on urs u guys never vote on mine...

Signore El Eye 08-11-05 08:34 PM

This was feedback posted for Rile1
 
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rile1 08-12-05 12:26 PM

You guys never fucking vote....bastards lol...please vote


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