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Some gangsta shit RV hasnet seen in a minute.....shit was hot had me bustin a verse for it......man keep up da good work and i hope we see some more shit like dis

^^^Fo sho Tony Green back and RV had lost they most gangsta nigga well I'm back and I'm bout to put it down for the streets and the hood UPPIN!

thiss right hurr was a tight piece every thing was solid let me break it down :

Tony Green: Straight gangsta good flow good structure vocab could enhance but the raw emotion of anger was shown good metaphors 8/10

Mc Philosipher: Structure was a problem for me....ur lines were too long at points some lines were played....still gangsta good metaphors as well....multis iffy 6/10

~B~: Structure was a plus on this...had a good flow wasnt really fealin some of the rhymes but u clarified ur time problems. vocab was tight coulda been better tho still straight gangsta as well..6/10

M-Eazy: Structure was not too good u and tony had the same kinda thing goin straight gangsta probally the most attitude....flows goood...work on vocab a lil but i felt it....7/10

overall a very nice piece felt the anger and the gangster in you all liked it very much i enjoyed reading it

please rtf on my collab wit the sick one or my others......thanks

Thanxx uppin!!!!!

uppin thanx for feedback nice callabo tony green

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ayyo i liked this one..
kept it gangster without losing the talent
unlike some Rv gangsters who jus rap like 50 cent
you manages to talk about guns and violence
in a classy way.. i liked the flow, rolled off the tongue nicely
vocab was decent, nothin special.. i liked tony greens verse myself

flow 9/10
vocab 6/10
multies 5/10
rhyme scheme 8/10

overall drop.. 8/10

return the favor my dude.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203072

Thanxx still uppin

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