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right...lmao
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Voted For: Reflekt
Refleckt Nice Shit Man Had Some Good Punches Here multi's Was Cool Too Dawg, Rhyme Scheme Was Meh Not To Good But It's All Good Personals Nice Man Kileld Em In This Battle You Wordplay Nice Meta's Meh Some Okay Man. Over All You Killed It Here KC Meh Not To Good Man You Suck Lols No Hate Yo Punches Was Basic Yo No Personals Just Phony Shits Vocabulary Was Garbage Here Nothing Special Here Man Try And Elevate Multi's Meh None Also No Meta's Which Is Sad You Rhyme Scheme Was Shitty To Man Vote-Refleckt |
Voted For: Kid Chaos
Reflext the only 'chaos' that we see is the lyrical content of ya verse ^^givin him props man^^ reflext u didnt come anywhere near as hard as chaos Kid Chaos my rhymes are frantic, im makin sure you die slow// the petty theatrics you call rhyming is the reason you gettin owned hoe// you supposed to be hardcore? do your "job" whore im waiting// my punches leave you bloody like a violence-and-gore game rating// ^^ nice punches dude^^ keep it up |
AITZ u suck...u a ho...u got no clue what battling is about..thats why your record is 3-10.....
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Voted For: Reflekt
reflekt damn, nice punches... the shove his dik down throat punch is good play on hisname. punches hit hard every bar. closure was solid enough kid caos- punches arent effective, bars are strectched in places. from opener to closure you didnt really have an effect on it. vote reflekt |
This was feedback posted for Reflekt
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uppin for more votes people
oh and it was weak but da last bar was a play off his intro dat said Job-Core |
still waiting on this for more votes...............
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Voted For: Kid Chaos
the big gun goes BOOM i say that so your small mind understands your own death// evident doom, i sympisize fo yo gloom its a hard time winning when yours skillz are as good as yo low rep// ^^^Weak punch......2/10 my rhymes are frantic, im makin sure you die slow// the petty theatrics you call rhyming is the reason you gettin owned hoe// ^^^WEAK........2/10 you supposed to be hardcore? do your "job" whore im waiting// my punches leave you bloody like a violence-and-gore game rating// ^^Not a punch,talking bout yourself whole bar..0/10 you not really a rapper your just roll playing// im done saying that won to avoid the hating, but ill still play my game of MC slaying// ^^not much of a punch.....1/10 if your the voice of god then im satan's diciple in a mask// unless your a fraud the bibles writings should be recycled and da jesus plays re-cast// ^^WEak......2/10 Not one dope line.First off....fix your structure up....it was ugly.Ur flow was choppy throughout the whole thing.As for punches...they were even worse.A lot of bars were just talking about yourself. son you about as much of a gangster as a movie star actor cant stand this bastard..i'll shove his first name down his throat backwards ^^Not a punch....set-up was uncreative/...0/10 the only 'chaos' that we see is the lyrical content of ya verse somebody better hold me back before i put this 'kid' in a hearst ^^NOT A PUNCH...0/10 i sit on faggots like kid chaos..so we'll call him a couch and since your from georgia you should be used to going down ^^A punch...but a weak one..1/10 you could talk all you want..but i swear i never heard nothing atlanta falcons?..thats ok cause im used to going bird hunting ^^SO wat...go bird hunt...but here at least trwo a punch...0/10 Man....where to begin.OK...you had a better structure than Kid chaos.FLow was also choppy.Wat you really lacked was wordplay and metas.You were stating some shit a lot.Yeah...you had a personal in every bar...but just cause you called him kid in that 4th line doesn;t make it a personal. Vote-KId Chaos RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203195 |
Voted For: Reflekt
ok by seeing the strutcure of you're verse i knew you won y cuz the otehr guy wasnt that good either red both of them and i didnt like them much but you had a good two punches and a few name lines i like the closer and you're openor they was good for chaos learn how to rite text cuz that mad me not wanting to read it but i read it and didnt like it you had no muich of a good verse well overall i think you lost kid chaos it was i sit on faggots like kid chaos..so we'll call him a couch and since your from georgia you should be used to going down you could talk all you want..but i swear i never heard nothing atlanta falcons?..thats ok cause im used to going bird hunting vs nada |
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