RapVerse.com Community - Pressence vs Black Queen

Voted For: Black Queen

dying for some sex,like your whole life is comprised of some ghost-kisses
cause all she be does is cum-plane bout it,like some horny air hostesses
—cum lines are played now, so that makes this opener wack
disrespected,cause ya Open Mics SUCK!,they all either,strayed-or-neglected
She got Game in her sig,just goes to show she gets played-and-rejected
—almost, not as hard hittin though
trying ya sell your soul,but nobody wanted to buy it,and u in a hot-drought
your rhymes are bout as this-hired(desired)as poor college drop-outs
—this-hired & desired.. come on now.. t & d.. is nowhere close
all over you plan on bitchin and bitchin,like it's your sole niche-and-it's-zigs
I'll slap you and have you covering half ya face like the bitch-in-ya-sig.
—decent bar, but ya could’ve said “like the bitch in her sig, but w/e, punch was decent here
she thinks I'm macreep based on Ip's,so now she feel special like a scholar
cause she lackes sense(cents) like some rich people obsessed with dollars
—meh, but the cents line was okay, could’ve made it harder than this though
buring herself up in a garden after swallowin seeds,is how she'd grow
cause her skill will never tie(thigh),with mines,like some legless hoes
—nope, this closer was wack here

overall you had an okay-verse, even though those comments there
I’m speaking the truth, so don’t come up on here and start beef, but
anyway.. like I said, ur verse was okay, you had some personas up in
there, the flow was lacking here though, a little long. The structure was
stretched even though u tried to use a different font, some punches were
played, wack & a one of them was good here, even though you’ve been
elevating ever since though. But overall work on your punches more often
and add more personas in your verses than just 2 of them here

Im in the damn Presence to just simply put you on the spot
By telling ya secret that you Macreep/Ktrini dont say you not *
—even though this line here is true that he is K-Trini, it wasn’t as hard hitting though, the punch was there, but it didn’t seem to land
Cause i'm a Soldier... and i get glad-with- haters(Gladiators) bars
They're just die knowin what's coming, like aliens from mars
—not really feelin this bar here
Of course, you just want to battle me to get the hype again
And you dig up all your rhymes from otha sites like its a reyclin bin
—hah, good persona use here, but the punch was decent
And this guy said IPs mean shit cus i said him n Macreep IPs the same
This nerd got sprayed so much thats why he needed a new name
—sprayed as in he got joked on so much he made a new name? cuz if so, this bar was pretty decent here
This herb finna get served fast so you be needing some help
So everybody should “Down grade your status to thug less!”
—nah, this punch was weak here
Nobody’s going to like you so please jus don’t even try dude
So why should I try fool, when you diss yourself more than I do
—idk if he dissed himself, but in the “recycle bin” thread, if that’s him.. then yea he did dissed himself here

overall you had an aight verse here BQ, the structure was in place,
meh, like anyone votes on structured-verses, the flow was pretty much
on point.. had a couple of personas up in there, but you could’ve added
more than that, since he has been joked on a lot of times here.. and ur
punches were decent, a couple of them weren’t as hard & a couple of
them were pretty decent, but overall you took this one, due to you had
punches that were harder than a couple of his played, weak lines here

no hate here, this is practically an honest vote

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