sick one better watch out, maddrapper might skull fuck you lol

woa^^^^^....kinda weird........uppin

sum feed wuld be nice....uppin

everything was iight man up on structure vocab multis u=mad potential...but battle me dawg newbie vs. newbie

need to work on the structure need to elevate just a little bit on the vocab

needs better structure, wordplay, imagery...wasnt feelin it all that much but it was decent jus work on those points i mentioned and u'll be aight kid

6/10 <---peep mines

..doS

Not bad man i liked it the end was a little corny but it was ight

Kinda Sloppy Structured and whateeva But Your Theory (Shall I Say) was Alright