This was feedback posted for Kid Chaos
 

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Okay....My breakdown...sum was stretched am sum was on point...Eh?

SOOoooooooOOOO LADIES an Gentle-MeN!...Get ur ass up out yyer seats
Cuz,This right here is a BLAZIN!!!!!!!!!(get it?)

First Contestant...comin out tha corner weighin in at 98lbs...at about 4'ft. an 7" inches tall.....is Kid Chaos( )

Line(1)-im droppin bombs you droppin smelly ass terds//
im spittin golden phrases while you spit dull and played ass words//
^^^^Bad opener...As they tell me on R.V....is that self glory is not good in a battle..an from what i see...Trust me its not..Tha punch was played...eazy ta read almost stretched tho'...3/10

Line(2)-its death parade my rhymes are like a grenade and im da one holdin you still for the ride//
my method isnt to drop lines that evade but take you down even if i have to commit suicide//
^^^^...Ah?..Yep!..You commit'd suicide wit this line here..it was stretched,and there was no wordplay...an Tha PUNCH!.."Oh My...",Weak.....2/10

Line(3)-its a mad mans verse vs a weak kids nursey rhyme mates//
its a sad plan and worse then that tweaked shit that you spit against aitz//
^^^Ah personal..it had a "Multi"...nice structure...sorta weak punch but a personal...best line thus far!...6/10

Last Line's-im spit flames so quit mayne i could you anyday bitch you ain no competion//
your skillz out ov this world because they were rejected by the planet//
im beatin and defeatin you just efecting poetic rhymes on some shit like hamlet//
you decomposed by my rap yo shit is worse then wack but i suppose its good you on ain on yo own track//
^^^I dont know what ta say about this...."BAD CHOICE!
Over Streched!!!..Played an couldve used tha Hamlet line way better than that.....3/10...

Overall...work on ur structure an punches...multi's,etc.

Now For Tha 2nd Contestant!!!!!
Coming in weighing 119lbs.and stand at about 5'ft. an 2"inches....Is YOOOoooouuuUUUNNNnnnnG BLAZE!!!!
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Line(1)-Eye's Scorn In Rhyming Wars,Snap Your Wrists So K Timing's Poor
Twist Ya Spinal Cord,Punch Ya Teeth Through Ya Cortex .........
.................................................. .........So Ya Mind is Torn
^^^Nice Multi's an wordplay..structure was nice..punch wasnt hard but still hit....7/10

Line(2)-This Is Not A Passive Contest But I'll Make Ya Grasp The Concept
Smashing Ya Face Through Tha Monitor To Create A Graphic Onset
^^^Hah!!!!...Nice!.....10/10!

Line(3)-Then Pounce This Fag When I Cut Your Joints in Two
Stick My Fingers Through Your Eyes To Give You My Point Of View
^^^^sorta played....worplay was aiight..heard it befo'...3/10

Line(4)-I'll Sink ur Clout U Can Scream And Shout Until ur Ink Runs Out
And Place ur 'Brain Outside ur Skull' So u Can 'Think This Out
^^^^Nice....good structure,multi's an etc......9.5/10

Line(5)-Its "HARD Ta SCHOOL Me" Kid..This "Ox Tryna Wonk Me
This Fag Only Gets To "Hits Ass" In Stables..Boxin With Donkeys
^^^^It was okay..sorta off tha wall!....nice play on words tho'..structure was good...6/10

Last Line-He Prolly Thinks His Drop Versed Well,but Blaze Dispurse Hell
I'ma Be the reason he's hooked on drugs cuz i'm handin............
.................................................. ......this kid his First L
^^^^Hah!...Nice closer....aiight punch...good structure,etc....but like I said"aiight Punch"....7/10

Overall...It was nice!.....Ur punches connect'd..wordplay was diff. there!

my vote is YOoUung BLAZE()


Return favor please...no hatin jus being Honest!