speatz u know damn will u dont wanna beef are u too blind ta see that aint real feedback...how the fuck would u respond wit that type of feed

i dont respond and wait for real feed...if ud never said something about new method's feed and waited for indeph's feed everything would of been okay

oh am i supposed ta bend down and kiss his ass cuz of the fucked up feedback he left if he woulda said he didnt like it i wouldnt fuckin mind i woulda just thanked him for the feed...but je didnt have ta fuckin put it that way

ah do the fuck what you want, keep bitching at people leaving feed

u see i didnt bitch at indeph i dont care if im down wit him or not i woulda never bitched bout it...if it real feed i wont bitch bout it...u know damn will that other shit wasnt real feed

LMAO

WTF is up wit all this wack shit on RV lately

kid sounds like he spittin through a straw

But...for the "real" feedback


ur flow is bad...u didn't ride the beat at all...its like dancing...there are DANCERS and then there are people who have RHYTHM...u don't have RHYTHM

ur delivery is bad because it sounds like ur stumbling and stammering over ur own tongue


the quality is horrible cuz it sounds like ur rapping through a cell phone...

If u bought a CD and it sounded like this, wud u honestly think NOTHING was wrong wit it?

c'mon...really

no one is an expert here...but listen to people man...why wud someone hate on u

u think this shit is sooooooooooooooo good that we ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLllll are jealous and are HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATIn on u?


get fuckin for real


and get a life while ur at it


stupid ass


Take the criticism and try again

and again

and again

and again

until u get it right

PERIOD.

ayo i dont think my shit perfect but it like startin off wit text u start wack as fuck and u elevate....im just droppin this shit so i elevate..but i cant elevate wit people just sayin this trash and it aint shit....maybe true but u have ta leave tips so i can elvevate fo real i wouldnt be even half the asshole i am if people would leave some real feed....Bro Yao i can understand..lol....and i aint rich so i cant afford anythang else right now until i can get the money..lol i didnt ask ta think of this as perfect quality..i'll get that through time but for a lil ya'll gon have ta deal wit it...and i know i dont have rhymn but it takes time ta elevate like i said im sure u didnt start out the way ur rappin now...this is no diffrent really u have ta admit this was better than the last shit I put out but yo except for the comments i appreciate that u took time ta really type feed not JUST that it was trash..that i dont have a prob wit

lol hey speats, are u in a film titled duex phun du camping?

^lmaooooooooooooooooo

yo no freepostin

lmao @ indeph stealing my dope feedback method

u found that on my myspace lol haha

holy shit.....this fuckin wack as hell....shit ur about as wack as it gets at starting.....u gotta wack voice..ya voice and change ups are gay..damn man you need too practice a lil before you spit..ur lyrics are gay too "Dental Floss" wtf...thats gay as fuck...step up ur game man

i jotted down wack shit so what...it was on ur fuckin level anyways Gayboy oh i mean Jroy....shut the fuck up and let this go down...and i aint as wacka s it can get..have u ever bro yao...i dont fuckin think so...shut the fuck up....you know i elevated lotz since this i hope ta fuckin god u know becuase that shit wasnt close to my best lyrics..im just savin my good shit for when i elevate..so shut up...i aint even gon beef over thsi shit ur lucky we in the same fam....and i aint gon say no more ta get me kicked out so..just keep ur mouth shut and i'll leave mine shut