yo.......................................vote on dis ppl ill return the favour

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This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
 

AITZ got straight up schooled by PNDizzle. Phree was the underdog and made a fool of the experienced AITZ. AITZ uses cliche words that have many rhymes. Phree has creative words that paint a picture, with smooth transition. I would like to battle them both

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y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u couldnt fool this crowd, with a personal line,
i'll whip away ur pride, like a homoside crime,

-homoCide crimes don't whip away pride

u got no proof on this aussie mc, i dont no why ur coming against me,
we drop lyrics that kill, fucked up lyricists, like this bitch,

-that makes no sense

watch as this, alterment bomb takes pinches, and merks this hypokrit,

-wtf is an alterment bomb? pinches? merks? you don't explain how he's a hypocrit

i'll stomp on ur skull with no hesetation,

-you haven't yet son don

make ur ass dull, and whipe out ur family's comunication.

-how does that wipe out his fam's communication, and what the fuck would that even matter? that is (still) not a personal

step up another contestent, aussie imp thats zinc has just crushed PhreeNapdizzle's intendents,
watch as this bitch drops his verse, iv just crushed him now im setting his curse,
iv got no match against you, and ur nothing but dirt, show me ur skillz cause they wont hurt,
ill take ur hit and walk away, u take mine like shit be left cryin 4 days...

-wow, i don't know what an intendent is, and I could spend all day on how bad this is, and you sure like the self-glorifications, but you did nothing


Napdizzle's isn't great, but enough to get the win

This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
 

yo i cant actually vote yet but if i could i would have to go with phreenapdizzle...the flow was good and the ryming too...the vocab was nice and the originality was great...so i would have to say vote=phreenapdizzle

Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

good drop u get my vote............................~peace~

Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

u couldnt fool this crowd, with a personal line,
i'll whip away ur pride, like a homoside crime,

Setup was ok, but punch was poor

u got no proof on this aussie mc, i dont no why ur coming against me,
we drop lyrics that kill, fucked up lyricists, like this bitch,

Filler

watch as this, alterment bomb takes pinches, and merks this hypokrit,
i'll stomp on ur skull with no hesetation,
make ur ass dull, and whipe out ur family's comunication.

Nah, dunno what the first line was about but second and third wheren't good either

step up another contestent, aussie imp thats zinc has just crushed PhreeNapdizzle's intendents,
watch as this bitch drops his verse, iv just crushed him now im setting his curse,
iv got no match against you, and ur nothing but dirt, show me ur skillz cause they wont hurt,

I'll take this as grouped together, but you should stop doing that where one line just seems totally random. But none of the lines were good at all

ill take ur hit and walk away, u take mine like shit be left cryin 4 days...

Weak, didn't hit at all, and had no real setup cos it was a single line


Lets all ride the fagget trail with AITZ as the conductor..
so he can tell a tragic tail a race to be sucker/

Setup was alright, second line was weak

you dumped to a low'a level, battlin 'gainst a newbie
now ill go show the devil just how ta get down n groovie/

The setup showed potential, but the punch was just a forced rhyme

youve chased me around to prove me, how ur lyrics could soothe me,
you roam in the towns without a crown and never moved me/

Filler

Ill give you some props tho, your records do show some wins
you barely even drop flows.. but suck dick to gather pins/

Poor bar

Go easy on me wont you?.. this is my first battle
put ya hand back down, dont you go n run off n tattle/

Setup was promising again, but punch was poor

I can suprise the guys that realize that they lines are just lies..
when i come back n tell the truth when rhymes aligned bust and fly/

Filler

See, I wont keep the jaws flappen bout killin you it wont happen..
that aint rappin.. all that bullshit actually makes me start laughin/

Nice inners, dunno why, but this line was alright

Please stop sweatin urself.. gobble'n like a hen
cuz the last i checked ur profile, your record was 3 and 10.

The setup was absolutely terrible, with a good setup this could have been punch of the battle as the personal was good, but as it was it was just so so

Phree had better creativity, flow and punches, yet this battle was reasonably close, Phree was just better.

v/Phree

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

punches -phree all round they are more effective more solid and hard hitting

personal-phree, theres arnt many in both drops,but phree had the more solid approach to them.

rhymes-equal, you both come weak with rhymes

flow- phree. your drop flowed nicley whiched help you get this win

return the favour link in sig.

aiight..im sortta feelin ur votes.......

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Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

polz..............................................