This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
 

man this was a close 1 both verses were good that's why i won't vote .... but yeah man you should always try to explain yourself it could make the difference between the w/l

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...... ..........................

UUUUUUppppiiiiiinnnnn............................. .......

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Young Blaze

Young Blaze took this with ease no question.......
Structure: Young Blaze
Flow: Young Blaze
Word play: Young Blaze
Multis: Young Blaze
Personals: only one and it too was from Young Blaze

PhreeNapdizzle -- advise: don't use "/" played out find a new structure, forget about telling us how great u are work on insulting ur opponent in the flow.. that goes to you to young blaze you did that a couple of times.. but it just tied very well so its ignored. . . Futhermore: just go and tell me.. "here! little hill billy, sin!"/
how.much.would-you give me if i let my willy win..: very preschool looked like you were just trying to rhyme.... sound 50 centish and taht very preschool . . . you could have said peter pper picked a peck of peppers and i would have given you more credit.... i aint trying to hate im trying to stop u from doing the same thing on ur next battle... also creativity is lacked in your verse... wordplay. . .puns... jokes... have your audience think alittle... make sure you flow is easy to follow cause many ppl on RV as soon as shit don't flow they don't even finish ur verse . . . .so work on those things keep writing and good luck to both

This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
 

Flwo verse, you fuckin' herb.......................

Uppppiinnn........................................ ..

Voted For: Young Blaze

long ass battle.........

Young Blaze - you had an all round good verse, the structure was nice and laid back giving the verse a decent flow all the way through. punches were there and were consistently hard hitting, a lot of this though ....................... i thought that was unnecessary, the wordplay and shit was dope as always, cud get a little more complex in places with the rhyme scheme but it was still dope..........

Dizzle - your verse to me seemed kind of herbish, i dont know if you're new to this whole thing, but first drop the // at the end of lines cuz it looks gay. the flow was aight, kind of choppy sumtimes.....punches were there although not as hard hitting as blaze. you had a couple of ok ones that made me laugh but overall i think you lacked in consistency, also try beffin up ya punches with some killer wordplay n shit and you'll do better.

V/ - Young Blaze

plz....RTF on my marvjay battle....links in my siggy :thumbup:
oh and, if you don't my vote will be removed...(only cuz the voting on RV sucks ass lately) pz. :thumbup: again