NVM, i thought you were...

but trini wasnt even half decent.

NVM.

first of all, i did not say this verse was any good, but it does beat yours.

second, i don't really use multies in verses, i only really use them in writing songs or pieces....you even said it yourself

so why would i use it in a diss, when i could spend more time with creativity, originality, and actual good punches.

third, yes, your rhyming is simple......king of whackness, bring some slackness or whatever you put, is not fucking hard to do, thats basic shit.

and lastly, i am not new here, so stfu, i'd own you any day.

word.

This was feedback posted for veyetal
 

check in pollz cuz V is in my crew now:D:D:D:D:D:D

Your verse beats mine you saying now?Hmm...so after one bogus verse from someone who clearly didn't read the verse....you gettin all excited.Just goes to show you an egotistical peice a shit.

And why use multis in disses?...well....how about to *gasp*...make it better????

I neva said you were new..read my post again...I simply said that your rhyme shceme was newbish...which is true.



And then you saying you own me and to stfu?...funny how before you told me try to reply without the beef....and now you say that shit.And ussualy...in an arguement...the one to diss first is the one who knows he lost.But wateva..I'm done with you and your ego.

So I had no internals and used multis too basic?...well thank you...I will use that feedback to improve.Unlike you...I don't have an ego.

I'm done arguing pointlessly with your stubborn ass.Here's a tip....get your head outta your own ass.

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uppin.....................

Voted For: Natural killa

Natural killa - Good spit, punches were hitten hard. You had a good flow in there also.

Best Line - you name making as much sense,as seein Trinidad swing-some-slackness
and ur user title is incomplete,cause u the 'original' king-of-whackness*

Worst Line - location's out n about,cause u constantly get kicked out,always be motoring
cause nobody ever ask(ax) for you,like some faggots to the deoderant

veyetal - Iight spit, you had some ok punches and your flow was good.

Best Line - like autumn leaves, he falls to the ground as soon as i shake'em
and im not talking about his sig.......when i'll easily rakim

Worst Line - its not natural, but i'll monkey around with this killa
take the k out of his name, cause im about to gore-illa

OVERALL - This battle was close but I think NK took this one, he had the better flow and harder punches. The other guy just needs some more creative shit.

Vote - Natural killa

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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

seriously you stupid fuck, i've had enough of you, YOU'RE NOT FUCKING THAT GREAT AT ALL, barely average, i use this alias to piss around, because thats all i do on here, is fuck around.....but seriously, you're garbage, and you obviously tried since you're taking offence to your bullshit verse, but if you wanna real battle, i'll fucking demo you on this name, and i'll try, because i seriously wrote that verse in 5 minutes, talking on the phone to my gf, so fuck yourself buddy.......you ain't shit at all, stop talking like that verse was good

i'll even crush the fuck outta you in topicals, now step the fuck up, or shut the fuck up

people like you who ruin RV.......and yes, you are k-trini, you are identical to him in every aspect.......fucktard

^^^thx for voting.......uppin.....................

you're the biggest fucking retard on this site

why should i pm you for a battle, lets battle pink slip fucker.

I knew it all along :cool:............

For drak and trini.

Voted For: Natural killa

its not natural, but i'll monkey around with this killa
take the k out of his name, cause im about to gore-illa
^^^ight opener...basic
like autumn leaves, he falls to the ground as soon as i shake'em
and im not talking about his sig.......when i'll easily rakim
^^^That was a Good personal....
your whack rhymes multiply every verse, you'll never have a single
cause once you drop, the shit don't stop...like rip offs of pringles
^^^IGht nuthin special
but this match is over, stab ya over and over, leave ya ripped
they say ask for a miracle and expect one...and ya just got whipped
^^^Played heard it million times changed

you name making as much sense,as seein Trinidad swing-some-slackness
and ur user title is incomplete,cause u the 'original' king-of-whackness*
^^^Good opener nice Personal...
he reppin an eagle pointlessly,shit,worse than all them mediation-fools
but u seemed to have lost ya wings,like someone robbed aviation-schools**
^^^Nice Personal Agian Good punch....
location's out n about,cause u constantly get kicked out,always be motoring
cause nobody ever ask(ax) for you,like some faggots to the deoderant
^^^Ight.......Not really a hard hittin punch
beat some newb,but after me you fall apart,like I did some-screw-pumping
and this ass join living legend in hopes of finnaly gettin a clue-to something**
^^^Good Closer wit the Personal.......

V/Natural Killa......this was an ight battle both came wit some good punchs....But vey u came wit some played lines that weren't originial...
Killa u had good personals that were consistent u most of ur verse was had good punchs an wordplay......No Hate V/NK

OK...^^thx for voting young blaze


and duabs and drakel?....wtf y'all niggas babbling about here...shit...get out of my battle thread please...

this is my battle thread, dumbass

and young blaze knows nothing, thats why he was only LW champion

somebody fuckin vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin 4 votes.....................................