...nigga hop off my dick, ur verse was trash anyway

^^Battle me nigga.................................

you drop unexplained verses twice...in less that 10 minutes

remove them then... i could care less.. and battlin u
would waste my damn time

^^ite...ya ain't gon battle....so end it...

peace....

This was feedback posted for .Merkage.
 

checking polls aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

damn !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
merkage is gettin merk
wow!!

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

Polls Weerd Rev Nice Going..................................

Voted For: .Merkage.

Yo, I don't know what a discarded Lay is, but the calandar pissed on/golden days is awesome. The Xbox/game quote is an instant classic. Peace to that.
You had nice flow and structure in the middle and end, but was still a little choppy. The ending you get a little full of yourself. Its hard to be confident you "killed" someone w / like 4 lines, and the last line had potential, but was weak.

The Rev: I like the punches in your first and 3rd lines, but the flow wasn't moving very good, and your last two lines ruined it. The part about gettin blown away kinda sounded shaky, b/c ( and I knwo you didn't mean it like this, but), sounded like you getting blown away was a question, that people could answer yes to. Then you act like you're the shit by not even needing to complete your words. nah man, don't get overconfident. It was interesting though how you attempted to diss where Merkage is from; props for dat.

Gotta give my vote to Merkage

1 more vote please.

Voted For: The Revelation

Better Punches and some comedy relief in there, but just i liked this verse more....