This was a hilarious piece exellent remix goes wit tthe beat nice....good structure made it flow nicely vocab hadd its ups..but u can always keep uppin in it multis...were iffy but u told the story right so multis didnt hurt you at all 8/10 deff......keep it up keep postin and of course RETURN THE FAVOR.IF NOT ON MY O/MS VOTE ON MY BATTLES PLEASE........1

haha i already told you taz i aint votin on ta battle so stop tryin lol
uppin...

yea that shit was funny no doubt

yea, um this was disgusting...........lol weirdo....but still straight fiah man......i was feelin the beat the flow.....good structure...up on ur mulits a bit woulda made it more enjoyable but for the most part u did good job 8/10 keep postin and doin ya thing.........peace

damn mayne i gotta agree w/ ya diz was funny & a real experience not ne guy would eva want 2 b in but i loved it ur creativity, vocab, structure & all dat was hittin on point 2 tha fullest extent u wasn't lackin in ne areas so yea u get a 10/10 4 diz 1 keep writing dat wild shit fa sho

uppin.. its been awhile since i upped this.. so here we go lol

read it.. its funny.. now post! lol