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Voted For: .Merkage.

Structure-Both had bad structure, cant vote on this catergorie both up on structure and make ur lines end up at the same point, cant stress that enough.

Vocab-Niether had appealing vocab, both should up on vocab as ur verse goes along...makes it more appealing to the eye....

Punches-.MERKAGE., had better punches...more fresh punches that hit harder, law ur punches were sorta played i wasnt feelin them....make sure ur punches actually hits ur opponnet

Personals-Best personal has to be from merkage first 2 lines...sick...keep that up homey practically won u the battle....didnt see much from law....up on that homey do you want to win?

Multis-Niether had appealing multis to my eye...multis helps the flow and makes it more appealing to read....both up on that.......

Originality-.merkage. was more original and fresh...verse law i didnt think urs was so original had very basic rhyme scheme....keep it up and shit.....

V/.MERKAGE.

RTF SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO ANALYZE YOURS
OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED :THUMBUP:

Voted For: .Merkage.

if u don't understand don't vote....: got to be stupd not to understand . . . u won pretty simple ... punches were harder hitting. . . personals was better. . . more structured verse. . . better flow . . well organized .. and easy to read : fav. line. . . look at ya "name" man da dummy underscores himself. . . well done keep writing

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i guess it goes to merkage : flow was better harder hitting punches: best line :look at ya "name" man da dummy underscores himself
Look "Jr." You anit tha "Law" but son ya ways are Trife...
:great punch topoo bad it didn't rhyme. . . but the punches were there beside that bar everything else was straight and like i said i still found it entertaining... desent drop keep writing.. good luck to both

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wow u both came so bad that this was close lol....

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