lmao thanx fa da vote but this battle is old ive elevated alot

This was feedback posted for RaDiKaL
 

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Voted For: Law_Jr

RADIKAL-ya, ur verse was iight...but mostly u contained self glor...your wordplay and concepts were good, but just to much self glor...try to incorporate....you had some attempts at punches...just didnt feel them...overall 3/10

ThatNigga-Your verse was pretty weak to be honest yo...u had the only str8 punches constintaly there.....up on getting ur structure normal and stop using whack wordplay...but u had the better punches

v/thanigga

rtf on my sig link with in 48 hours or this vote dies

LoL @ that nigga even getting one vote in this battle..

Voted For: RaDiKaL

meh basic vote...coz really this battle was basic nothing really stood out for me although this is old ish by both standards so i'm expecting there ahs been elevation on both parts since...

ThatNi**a: 1st bar was average not really hard hitting 2nd bar was ok on the hemaphrodite rhyme and closer was weak on the side of rhyme coz it was a same line rhyme and a lil gangsta ish lol

rads 1st bar was better IMO break law like i jus littered was aight original i guess flipped ya old name 2nd bar was again aight son in law flip was cool as was rhyme and 3rd bar the closer was meh let his verse down not as good as the 1st 2

with that said my vote goes to RaDiKaL because he had 2 ok bars where as TN only had 1 really so it's a case of consistancy in my eyes...RTF in my sig vs E.C HONESTLY

Voted For: RaDiKaL

ThatNigga

When you decided to challenge me you decided to meet your creator
This guys hardly hit puberty and already he's a master-bater
Played as hell..
Who this nigga think he iz callin out people left and right
He keep switchin on niggas like a dick and pussy on a hermephadite
Nah..
Let me end this battle cuz im sure this faggot gotta go 2 bed
The next you see you Dude will be on his Fuckin Deathbed
Didn't connect..

RaDiKaL

I got thunderous text dat make ya ~chest quiver~
and watch how I 'break law' like I ~'just littered'~
Pretty cool..
When RV mentioned da best textcees,you ~wasnt in da picture~
so dese rhymes are 'sonnin law'(son-in-law-) like I was da ~'husband of ya sister'~
Decent..
Dawg you wack,keep thinkin ya not,I'll let ~da piece off at ya~
cause only people 'takin law serious' is ~'police officers'~
Cool..

Overall, ThatNigga came with a bunch of sub par lines. None of them connected, and they just weren't that good. In his last punch he tried to rhyme bed with bed and it just sounded awkward. Radikal came with some pretty cool shit.. all nameplays, but they were chill. his concepts connected and made for good punches. So, in conclusion, Radikal gets my vote for the better overall verse.

Vote - RaDiKaL

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aight......uppin..................................

RTF please........................................

Voted For: Law_Jr

v/ thatnigga cause he tried to spit punches the other guy is wack talks but self glory

Voted For: RaDiKaL

v/ Radikal

Just thought that his verse was better and hit harder. I didn't think thatnigga had any real hard hitting punches except 'Who this nigga think he iz callin out people left and right
He keep switchin on niggas like a dick and pussy on a hermephadite'. I thought this was his only real hard hittin line.

'Dawg you wack,keep thinkin ya not,I'll let ~da piece off at ya~
cause only people 'takin law serious' is ~'police officers'~

Radikal had a few decent punches but i thought that this was his best and one him the battle

Punches - Radikal
Wordplay - Radikal
Flow - Thatnigga
Personals - Radikal