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Voted For: taz
ok taz... ya structure was fucked but it still flowed nicely and i felt the disses.. had some good personals in there and overall most of the lines had some sort of punch.. 5/10 killa... structure was nice.. had some wordplay but i didnt see any of it aimed at taz.. and didnt see any good disses or even solid disses at all they were kinda half there.. needed to focus more on dissin taz and not jus freestylin.. 4/10 my vote - Taz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Much appreciated^^^ thanks man........still uppin.......hey natural killa kid i was gunna vote for you on ur battle for detrimental dawg.......
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Voted For: Natural killa
put nothing in ya prof.,scared,surrounded by death,and confounded by sweat Cause Taz's is E-motion-all,like everyone's moving around on the net I'm pissing on your spit,nobody feelin it...why you ask?,cause ya tryna glisten on shit and your verse and tazmania talking's the same...cause nobody listening to it squashed u like a salamander,your spits are gay,like your color ya mouth up with valendar and after this you gon be lost in dazzed(days),like vagrants without a calendar A real nice verse homie...some good punches and personals in there and u shud always work on ya structure homie!!!! 7/10 vs Thought he was born blessed to stand out from da rest, truth is ur born depressed with two female breasts on ur chest/battle me homie u need a bullet proof vest, admit it Killa, u impressed at how quick ur girl undressed at my request/Natural deffinitaly not ya rhymes, Killa deffinitaly kill your own rhymes... aint hard ta beat em wit a sick nasty mind/Natural Killa got bitched out in his own thread, Drakel bitched this cat out now he actin dead time ta unwind/You aint no homicide killa wanted for a murder...this cat lifted his gat then bowed down cuz he saw c. murder/He bow down to pussy niggas that cant rap, so he bow down to himslef.......thats a rap... For a start you need alot of work on ya structure cuz that shit is just hard to read....some aight ryhmes but no real hard hittin punches sori homie but keep elevating!!! 5.5/10 v/NK |
lol, iight still uppin for votes.......let em role in please
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el dios, look at his verse did he actually diss me? didnt think so
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Voted For: Natural killa
Aight...here it is.... Flow:Natural Killa(well,had more) Punches:Natural Killa Personals:None.... Metas:Natural Killa(I would have ta say....) Multies:Natural Killa Vocab:Natural Killa(confounded was prolly da biggest word in da battle lol) Creativity:Natural Killa Enjoyment:I enjoyed Nat's more.... My Vote: Natural Killa Explanation:Taz's 1st line came out...but I guess he lost interest as he went on......Natural Killa...wouldnt say da 1st punch you had hit hard...but I see whatcha sayin by it....but da rest was pretty good....it had better structure(not dat I care bout structure)....but dats my break down... ..!!..pEaCe..!!.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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uppin yo......dont sleep on this battle man
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Voted For: taz
Structure-NEither, no one had good structure at all.cant even comment on the structure....... Vocab-Natural killa, not much vocab in either but natural killa took this wit the word vagrants...lol both up on that and elevate Personals-once again none ddidnt feel that either verse had a personal that effected anything......both up on that Punches-both wer not that great but i think taz's hit harder Originality-Both had fresh verses but taz was fresher and was more appealing wit his first line and the way he closed it ...was feelin it...made me think of tha dave chappelle thing..so i thought it was funny Multis-Both had good multis, especially taz's first lines y natural killa had some multis but they werent appealing...... v/taz |
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Voted For: taz
Natural killas punches were all weak as fuck, he even admitted 2 his structure bein fucked up wtf? he basically was sayin dont vote 4 me, it loks like that was the first verse he ever spit Taz had so raw ass punches i especially liked the 1 where he sed his female undressed at his request, over all structure wasnt perfect but it was aight this vote goez 2 taz |
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^^Thanks man appreciate it still uppin yo
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