This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Stanza

stanza came with a betta flow in the six lines, narc your death line thru it off, the wordplay narc you had was weak, stanza came with simple wordplay but betta used it wasn't forced, outta twelve lines red i give this battle to stanza

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Aye Narc

Lets Have The CRew Vote On This man Bcuz its gettin slept on so what do you say if you agree to it in here than it can be passed so the votes will not get DQ'ed

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

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Voted For: Stanza

was ok even though u only had 30 min. a lot harder to vote than i thought; you're pretty evenly matched.
Stanza:good flow and punches, last one was sorta weaker than the others.
Narc:health and death don't rhyme unless u got a accent. but i can't tell cuz this iz text. bout the same as Stanza with the flow and punches, but i think Stanza's punches were a little harder.

Voted For: Stanza

U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"
decent, cool personal.....

Dog you outta place why even try dont you know this aint good for your "Health"
I'll hold Onions to ur Face wit a Gun in ur Eye so you'll Cry at the "Sight of Death"
preety good, decent...

Hold your Breath Stanza cause im bringing heat like the weather of the 'Tampa"
Going south like Atlanta and your rhymes are old so ill just call ur verse "Grandpa"
ok ending, could of been better but not bad......

i thought u started good 2bar was preety good then u feel off but all around good drop....

7.5/10


You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator
decent start...

I Think That You Sorry The Way You Talkin All That Babble
And No Action Taken So next Time Dont PM Me for a Battle
no punch, weak...

Time To Stop Only 6 Lines Was Required For Me To Take The Cake
And Like Fat Bitchez Ya Strutures Comes In So Many Sloppy Shapes
ha decent ending....


imma brake this down....

flow: tied * ya both flowed ya punches and each bar well*

punches: stanza took this with the last bar i thought it was the best punch in this battle

creativeness: stanza bearly took this one but he did by a hair...

all around close battle but stanza bearly took this one but he did have slightly better punches and was slightly more creative with them....


BUT GUESS WHAT.....

IT DONT MATTER WHO WIN ITS STILL TRIGGER TOWN INC NIGGA'S!!!!! YA BOTH HELLA GOOD......

but either is better then me LMFAO J/P

Voted For: Stanza

This was a tight battle and I don't want the dollars for voting but yo I think Stanza took this one he came more original and his punches was hittin harder fav line was....

You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator

NaRc you cam hard too I just thought Stanza came more original but my fav line from you was.........

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U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"

tight battle and I love you both but Stanza took this

ya do now that a respirater helps you breath not sops you from breathing LOL come oon think guys LOL

Voted For: Stanza

good drop u get tha vote nice flow and vocab no hate~peace~