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This was feedback posted for BaM!
 

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote?...................

This was feedback posted for Kon.Tay.Juz
 

just here checkin...................................

yo kon tay juz why u even bother battelin this newbie?.........

uppin this dayum battle...................................

werrrd............................
FL=hurt sack

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kon’s crew
Rep us in your sig.


They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant!
^horrible rhyme, and the quotes screw up the flow bigtime

Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels
^am I missing something? nothing here ryhmes w/ wheels

It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars…
Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark!
^ok, decent punch, decent rhyme

You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar
Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers!
^what would be wrong w/ hitting a vet? that's hot. plus, that would be singular
(baller), not plural; he's only one person

I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today
Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away!
^horrible closing. fake personal, how do you know he has bad breath
(especially if his mic tosses him fresh mints?)LOL. There's no war against
bacteria, bacteria can't run, and bacteria causes bad breath, so you contradict
yourself, dipshit.

Kon:

Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me..
This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy..
^HAHAHAHAH, great start and personal

Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves..
Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves..
Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man..
Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams..
^good personal, flow and rhyme.. you clinched the win here already...

Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B...
My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy..
^this line seemed a little forced, but it was aiight...
I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch..
...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch..
^Man, you owned him this line, plus a great finisher. Damn, fantastic analogy.
You live up to your name

No question who gets this vote: Kon Tay Jus

word up aiight 2-0 me..................................

^ lol at that hate vote. whatever, dude, go be normal.

ps. -seal rhymes with wheel, go to school you stupid fuck.
-you're = all vets on site = PLURAL
-finally, don't talk about personals when all you have are mom and gay jokes

pz.
2-1, slim :)

Voted For: BaM!

just checking da pollls................................

dat was supposed to be feed ma fault
remove dat..............

up...............

aiight
 

aiight, correction: wheels did have a riming word.. I didn't copy and paste the 3rd line when i wrote feedback. You got me there, happy? Oh, and by the way, "dick" is singular, ballers is plural. one dick can't make multiple ballers. I honestly feel sorry for you.

one dick does make multiple ballers if multiple people are riding it. the stork must've dropped you on your head when putting you on the doorstep. :)

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