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Voted For: Ridicule

lol.. okay this was a very weak battle.. seriously

Ridcule: okay.. verse is below average... well average atleast since there was personals.. your punches were okay.. it was really confusing.. n a punch shouldt be hard to understand if it was good.. so yea.. work on that.. strucutre. blah.. flow was blah.. basiclly elvate on battling.. 4/10

Natural:
your verse was basiclly same. your structure is blah.. flow is blah.. the lines on ur verse n his is way too long.. try to make it shorter as if it was a real live battle.. punces were softer that water man.. barely tapped him.. n vice versa for him.. elevate on everyting..

overall: ya got potential.. jst dont try so hard.. if u do than nothing good will come out.. well ya.. elevlate on everything

vote: ridicule.. was all same.. but fact he had better personals..

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Voted For: Ridicule

flow an structure - ridicule
he came with an easier read verse an set ups that fit the rhyme scheeme betta

natural your bars were all connected an it didn't make it hard to read it jus made it look more like a keystyle but the chooped wordplay lines you had wasn't kicking it

punches an personals-ridicule
ridicule came harder with set ups an punches , his closer was funny . i thought ridicule had the better of this battle.

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Voted For: Natural killa

Dawgs been talking, that a textie be gettin whored by an audio head
So I went over,took a look…….lines that resemble u,just to overfed
3...weak, nuthin overly creative and he's also winning his battle against Tha Q 2-0 so it makes this shit kinda gay.
Stopped in his tracks cuz you got chewed up and spat back down under
Battles which u cud have neva won,taz has been renown for herb asunder
5...ok bit of wordplay, but punch was not all that good.
How the fuck u here to kill us because u can’t beat us went ur knocked out
Getting beat by cartoons,audio n even da blind,is nothing im shocked about
4...ok weak, ya still playing on the shit you already said, change the subject.
This fags rhymes all recycled,so stay away, he aint safe for the envirement
Cuz he's gonna be like former boxers "Trinadad" going into Retirement
4...played concepts, especially the recycled environment concept, DAMN!
Been banned by Vets and beat by newbies,cuz in a few months that’s occurred
And hows ya music gonna go far, when even your Ma doesnt want you to be heard
5...not bad, prolly the best bar of ya verse.

OVERALL: 21/50


suffocating as i'm braiding out ya air,ya fading outta here,as i spit my innuendo array
cuz he's about as close to a young profit(prophet) as nintendo is today**
6...nice punch, original concept and good little multi in the first line.
i bet a rich boy like you feels rebelious and intellectual for one liter-a-chore(literature)
but after this battle,your stuck staring at the sky like TuPAc in ya signature
5...not bad, 2pac lines are really played and gay though now.
crying for the nurse tattle,cuz it's his 1st battle,n he's gonna buffet the best born
but he's a rook-key trapped,like someone locked away the chess board
6...good concept, chess thing getting played now but you delivered a decent punch with it.
10 bars off the top,'s all it took,like old books,we'll just put you on the shelf
could be another Miss Cleo,cuz ya name tells us what ya verse gon do to yaself
6...LoL!! another decent punch with a good concept used.
ya lost ya 1st quick like sonic,n ya now listened to the chronic,like ya shocks stay full
ya dumbass is clueless,shit,ya's behind times like giving the clocks anul
5...ok wordplay, not really feeling the punch though.

OVERALL: 28/50


ok battle, natural came far more consistent with decent punches than ridicule who had far too many played concepts....overall natural had the more polished verse and only fell off with a couple of bars, ridicule you need to come more original and throw in some dope wordplay to add more affect to your punches.

V/ - Natural Killa

plz...RTF on my marvjay battle.....links in my siggy :thumbup:

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