looooooooooooooooooooooool

aside from this bullshit ass e-trash talk i figure what the fuck imma listen to this and see whats up surprisingly you sound alot better than ive heard previous still i kinda wish you;de get a little more bass iin ya voice but you work with what ya got snser was right ya did slow up in some spots but overall an enjoyable track with a few flaws beat choice was real tight i thought and contnent was decent so way to up your game

*real talk*

listening while i type -


First verse - I liked it.. shit was nice.. kid has talent for real..yea i did hear a lil mobb deep type shit in there.. sounds like em... but good shit..

second verse- i wasent really feelin at all.. the heat wasent there like in the first verse. .. Coul'dve done with out..


Third verse - Omen.. lyrially man you there.. but the flow lagged.. you never fell off.. but you werent really on it na mean.. what you were sayin and ya scheme was on point.. but i agree with senser.. once you find ya flow and make it fit the beat.. you gon be pretty ill

listening:
beat is really dope, first verse is pretty dope, really dope, flow is hella dope, chorus aint that bad, 2nd verse is dope too, omen came hard once again, pretty dope man, im putting this song on a cd seriously its dope as fuck

10/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204456

^good lookin man, ima get at ur link tomorrow... finally u comin back to peep my ish man, tha fuck u used to b first one to give me feed doggie....lol

meh, mite as well piss every1off by uppin this one more time...