Thanks its the first time I tried this type of thing...the reason I swore was because I was watchin Stan by Eminem, and he did kinda the same thing..but It didnt work out so I wont do that no mo

get on msn man lol

Yo man I am on msn................................

this joint was pretty good dog. especially cuz shit like this happens alot when parents fight over custody n tear they kids lives up n shit. but you had good flow in here and some good structure too. this was one of my fav bars
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"Judge if you deny me the right for the sight of my baby girl,
You mite as well, make me cry, die and for me end this world,"
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pretty nice joint here ima give it an 8.5/10 you could have more metas in there
but overal shit was good.
return the favor on the links