thnx for the feed I left feed on yo soccer kid diss song...

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well i love this version wit bow wow, anywho, i think your vocals need to be upped a lot cuz like i got my headphones turned all the way up and i cant even hear you, your flow needs mad work, it seems like you kinda wrote to some other beat, and you forced shit man, emotion needs a lot more work, quality needs a lot of work as well, and the way you tried to match the hook and shit was bad man, you could made that work better. anyway keep elevatin man.

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thnx for the feed even if I didnt like it I can take critism lol.

shit was aight fam...ya flow seemed a lil off at times and omarion's hook was mixed just a lil off beat...ya lyrics were decent...only thing that held it back from being better was u were trying to fit to many words into some of ya bars and o's hook being outta place...keep working at it though fam...rtf on "Tell Me"

it will help if you gave me the link to ya song.

make a thread of it in this forum and I'll leave feed there

i just made a thread

listenin..
was gonna do this also lol
your voice reminds me of some cat i know..
flow is coo,
delivery fits the track i guess
quality needs to be upped tho
not bad track man, keep droppin!