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Voted For: Young Montana

checking polls..............nice verse both of ya..............................

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oh shit get that removed.....................

sorry ya'll............................. :huh:

Voted For: Natural killa

killa........decent verse, you had a nice flow with some good hitting personals in there. try not to use the links in your verse becuz that is considered played on RV. anyway, some punches were weak, but a lot were hard hitting, u were real consistent in this battle, nice wordplay throughout, although sometimes you got a little basic, the rhyme scheme was cool and shit, you cud get a little more creative at times but overall some good shit.

montana.....nice flow, but to me your verse seemed a little basic in places, not as consistent as killa's was, ure punches were weak or average, maybe one or two hard hitters but mainly they need work, ure wordplay was ok in places, u cud try to beef that up and just get more creative with your punches for better affect.

overall i think that killa came more consistent in this battle and had the hard hitting punches and personals, both y'all need to drop the links and shit cuz they are played out but still good battle from both y'all.

V/ - Natural Killa

Voted For: Young Montana

uhhm, being totally and brutally honest, this battle was kinda whack.

but im giving it to YM, because he was more consistent with punches, his personals were more creative, nothing was forced....uhh, but still, some shit was stupid.........NK, you just had a lot of simple stuff, and concepts that aren't that hard hitting,.........like the facts one; its not effective when you say that the only facts he is spitting.....cause now you're calling him a liar, and that's on the boundary of fake personals....and actually, his aim is thafuturejoka, with an a, so yeah, but YM, need to try a little harder, last half of your verse saved you, Q jokes are played, game jokes are played............word...., heres the lines i liked

1st ima end ya internet career, then ya life is next
this dude'll prolly still b a virgin if the nigga didnt hav Cyber Sex
i got tools to leave you bruised, so its best that you play it cool
you shoulda learned not to fuck wit Montana, next time bitch stay in school
you da lamest dude, fall back, cus my hammers explode clips
and itll make ya ass lose weight faster than Anna Nicole Smith

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see,it's all simple,you and the pimple,too ugly,ya wouldn't be a model for shit,
so hear what kid,go to here,and buy yaself a bottle 'a this
ya too lame to substain,puttin ya son in his shame when your frontin in exchange
cuz only your own verses alone are as played as puttin young in a name

both ya'll need to step up your game, too many links were used......uh YM, get a lil more creative, NK, stop focusing so much of your verse on multies....alot of punches/rhymes come off as forced because you try and word punches around multies

v/young montana

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Voted For: Natural killa

NK - you came with original concepts. & they hit harder. nice personals, specially this :

muting ya flows,without the bootin n smokes,when i'm shootin ya clothes
so it's suitin ya blows,n even he knows he a clown,his AIM's DaFutureJoke

overall you had a deeper verse, enjoyable to read. better wordplay/punches and had good personals.

TM - decent verse, you had personals but they didnt conenct as well as NT' did. few bars were just completely weak. your best bar was :
unlikely, ur unlike me, cus girls got me straight and delight
this nigga became happy, wen he found out he wasnt the only nigga Gay On The Site

overall you just didnt come harder than NT.

overall vote - NT, for being better with wordplay/punches & personals.

NT, rtf in my sig or ill have this vote DQd.

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