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Originally Posted by Scruff

GOHD..wait..ima lace this beat when i get around to it..i love it..but anyway...

flow is pretty good..that stands out ckuz it sounds real nice...nice and polished..quality is meh..could be upped..sounds muffled..lol chorus is meh..nice try but..im not feelin that..just kno that a key to a hot track is a flamin ass chorus..i like the lyrics on second verse...u didnt keep jumpin around...on the chorus.."im stuck on the outside lookin in"..that part is ok..just the stuff u say i dont like..third verse..is good too..if u upped ya quality..put a way betta chorus on this..it would be pretty good..GOHD i love that beat..watch out for my track on this beat...:)

OO YEA...i see alot of cats sayin u like.."top audio level"...plz..plz..dont let that go to ya head..

heh...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204756
rtf :rolleyes:

ahem....

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damn, this shit's hott kyd, you did a better job here than the other one, flow's a lot better on this one jo...I like how you got angry on some bars...definetly a lot mroe creative than your opponent, I told him do smoething more creative, lol...

get at me on AIM yo, I gotta talk to you about something...

this was good like dia said i wasnt feelin tha chorus either other than that i have no complaints verse were good flow was good lyrics were there overall good track jus fix up some things an this track be dope keep droppin kid =1=...

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