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Voted For: TheSinnister

That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes
Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break
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this one good punch won the battle cuz it was the only one in the whole battle... creative and it hit

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yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"*
my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them
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this had wordplay but similies aint good and this isn't a punch its talkin about you and not dissin 'em
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u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water
your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther
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decen't punch but sayin someones record isn't goin any farther isn't really a punch also it was another similie
should said sumin like..
my fresh battle style take this match your old and a sittin duck
and ya wins column must have erectile disfuctin cuz it aint gettin up
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see that was a metafour
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anyway PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR... link in my sig

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This was feedback posted for TheSinnister
 

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Voted For: Unrestricted

Look At You A Fuckin Wack Mental Case
Get Away, Your Makin Rv Look Like A Dicrace
4...too basic
just Incase, I Got My Pencil Case
In A Suit Case So I Can Earase You With An Ozzie
1...no punch
Chase The Sinnister And You'll Lose Me
Your Angry Words Just Sooth Me
Make Me Nautious And Woozy
3.....basic and weak as fuck
I Don't Know How I Can Get So Many Mixed Feelings
How I Love To Hate Your Voice From Squeelin,
3...weak...wtf?..when you gonna spit a nice line?
Or What Ever That Sound Makes
That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes
3...weak..weak!!...said makes too much..fuked flow
Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break
It's Time To Take A Permite Break You Little Hermit,
3.....omg.....punches!!where are they!!
I Don't Want To Make You Disquraged, But Im Cashing In Your Life Insurance, Don't Worrie About Your Mother She Loves Dick And Cool Whip
2...no rhyme?

yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"*
my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them
2...self glorifing in 2nd line..should of switched it so 1st line was punch
u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water
your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther
4....basic....but still had a little hit
TheSinister, bitch ass nigga, jus give up, here is a word of advice to u from me
ur bitch ass say ur a sinner so ur from hell which means ur used to being fried repeatedly
4....meh....w/e.

Ok...Unrestricted got this very weak battle

sinnister...i don't know what that was.Structure an everything was good...by lookin at the verse alone..looked like you'd win...but when i read it..i saw you didn't throw one decent punch.And some lines...like that cool whip/insurance one..didn't rhyme.

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its one flow i should be an adiuo head.............