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WhAt EvEr It TaKeS 08-22-05 01:12 PM

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS

just cause i portrait as new you fucks is whack lol no hate

Yvonne 08-22-05 03:21 PM

huh?????????

uppin this shit mayne..................................

Journal!st 08-23-05 04:29 AM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

yo man WERD rob took this shit man it a run away yo............bitchez stop dick riding


IP:


Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
^^ decent opener yo REAL

your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
^^ nice finisher man WERD..........1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS 08-23-05 02:11 PM

lmao that was a pussy move.....this battle was me lmao! whatever to much dickriders on rv no wonder the best emcee's are all leaving if this goes your way i'm taking a rematch on my real name my alias name.

Yvonne 08-23-05 06:05 PM

why shud u take a remarch?...if you win fine if i win fine...lets not start takin ordinary battles serious man...

uppin this stuff...

Yvonne 08-24-05 10:26 AM

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Moral 08-24-05 10:29 AM

This was feedback posted for Robert De Niro
 
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Yvonne 08-26-05 02:38 AM

uppin mayne...peeps stop sleeping...wake the hell up....

Yvonne 08-27-05 08:09 AM

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Yvonne 09-12-05 07:21 AM

wast isht?????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????

Dickard. 09-12-05 07:05 PM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

Yvonne

u wudnt be hotter dan a hoe cake even if u were from d oven
bitch,if u dot wanna Tripple like N count ur steps b4 u stolen
^MEH, wasnt feelin this punch/opener forced rhyme 2/10^
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental
^Wow, again forced rhyme....not a hard punch 0/10^
babies break thru ya ego and make u re-arrange yr shit
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
^Simple jab, nothing special....4/10^
listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect
^No punch, bad closer.....coulda been stronger 0/10^
Overall:I actually dispised ur verse, no hate but seriuosly u have to atleast diss ur opponentl.....ur only punch wasnt even in ur verse lmao.....ur punches were soft and barely felt...as for personals i feel they were left out and absent.........overall 4/10^

What Ever It Takes

IP:


Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
^Good opener, nothing special...4/10^
i guess you would get a vote.....if the system ever won
but it's wins stuck at 0 sort of like elevationg from Yvonne(Y-Von)
^Meh, not feelin this punch....sorta forced 3/10^
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
^Pretty decent punch, i felt the flow...decent 6/10^
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
^Good closer, felt the ending....and good punch 7/10^
Overall:I felt your verse was average...Ur structure was tight, good flowing verse.Ur punches were there and soft at times....felt they were PREtty decent mon.Ur personals were iight....nothing special nor hard hitting....overall ur verse was pretty decent overall 6/10^

rtf on my sig link, since i took the time to vote on ur battle.......my battles need voting...they all slept on so make sure to leave an honest explained vote thnx peace

Sik Wit It 09-12-05 09:27 PM

This was feedback posted for Robert De Niro
 
This person won this battle

Yvonne 09-13-05 08:23 AM

lol..smh

...no matter how many more generations rv gon still b the same


uppin this shit mayne lets get it closed

Magic5 09-14-05 12:34 AM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

Yvonne

u wudnt be hotter dan a hoe cake even if u were from d oven
bitch,if u dot wanna Tripple like N count ur steps b4 u stolen
0.. Garbage.. just a statement that isn't revelant at all..
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental
0.. Just another statement.. with some wordplay.. too bad the statement isn't a punch, and the wordplay doesn't relate to the battle at all..
babies break thru ya ego and make u re-arrange yr shit
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
3.. Just a statement, but decent enough..
listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect
0.. Garbage.. another statement that nobody cares about..

Overall - 3

Robert De Niro

Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
0.. Ok?.. This isn't revelant..
i guess you would get a vote.....if the system ever won
but it's wins stuck at 0 sort of like elevationg from Yvonne
1.. Horribly forced..
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
2.. Could have made it so much better..
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
1.. Just a statement, but at least you tried to include a punch..

Overall - 4

Vote - Robert De Niro

Magic5 09-14-05 12:36 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Yvonne
lol..smh

...no matter how many more generations rv gon still b the same


uppin this shit mayne lets get it closed


Shut up.

All you do is AIM/MSN for votes between you and your buddies.. either that or I always see you voting on Front Lines battles asking for people to "return the favor."

So, when people like myself actually vote honestly you bitch about it?

Grow up.


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