word. thanks for the votes. upping this...........

uppidy check......................................pz

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Voted For: -UNF-

i vote fo dis guy
bcause i like what he had wrote
it was poetry at work and it looked like he did it
quick as hell
dis guy had a Flow, good struct and punches
he came out strong therefore i give him his vote

best line
U So Borin If U Performed Live 'Jacob The Jeweler' Wouldnt 'Care To Watch'

Voted For: -UNF-

14 - 0 record .. but all against newbies UNF' pushing his luck.
dude im not gay but i wanna fuck you..

UP..
i prey on bitches with lust, & like Tech N9ne guns will bust.
repping UK to the fullest? ya missed ya chance to blow up..

in LDN on the bus*
cant spar for long with the best, ya winning streak will never last.
unfucks clutching the pen & inc, when i put this trigga don ina cast.**

Opener was far too basic, good opening line, then your punch was worded horribly.....

I liked the london punch, good hit right there, made me laugh.....

closer wasnt very good either, again good opening line but the final punch let you down....Ya last punch should be one of your best, too finish off your verse, an you failed too achieve that, verse lacked ALOT of consistancy.

UNF:

Ya opening line seemed like forced multies, BUT....You recovered well, that jacob the jeweler shit was Niiiiice..

Opening line in the 2nd bar was dope, good vocab an flow, wasnt feelin the stevie wonder punch, it was creative, just needed too have better wordplay in there.

Closer was DOPE tho, Good punch made me laugh too....

Overall unf gets the win, better wordplay an more consistant with his 6 lines..

Voted For: -UNF-

-unf- took this one to easy you word.
good pucnehs and all