fuck........why no one voting?....................

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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

oo-shit u are truly WACK........
U GOT OWNED BADLY HERE....

just quit now while u ahead....

^^ LoL!! killa you got a lot of haters..............

Voted For: King Solo

King Solo:
This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
true personals are good, but this doesnt hit very hard
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ good wordplay, nice punch
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
ok.......doesnt really hit too hard
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains'
first line is bad, because u mean scramble, not scrabble...2nd line doesnt make much sense without the explanation
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses'
not bad, not that good either
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below
lol, good closer, could also refer to his verse, even though that wasnt intended

overall- good verse, 2/6 punches were really good (a-team, look below) ur problem is that most of the punches dont hit that hard...

natural killa:

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
his record really isnt something u should draw attention to
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
doesn't hit very hard, but not bad
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
that hit harder than any of ur other punches, pretty good
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
didnt hit hard at all
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)
doesn't rhyme, or doesn't make sense, depending on wether or not "loser" is part of the line
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
better, but not as good as king's closer

overall- not as consistent as king's, most of the punches were weak...


v/king solo

please vote on my battle with kapital, link in sig...

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

checkin polls, good drop both....should be a close one..

WerdNizzle........................................ ........

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Voted For: King Solo

Damn one sided to me Solo just straight ripped this kid he came more original and with better puncehs fav line was.......

See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below (6th)

Nk the problem with you is you come into these battle too cocky you came okay but could of did better like the Soul-o line was played as fuck but my fav line from you is......

his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)

but solo gets my vote

WerdNizzle again......................uppin again...........

Voted For: King Solo

This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
rofl good opener ^^ lol he has no life i dont think
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ (2nd)
^^rofl like ateam its funny good punch
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
^^ok not ya best
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains' (4th)
^LMMFAO rofl..good connected
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses' (5th)
rofl......jus got it o.0
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below (6th)
LMAO good finisher

good structure good punches great personals...LMAO good verse i neva seen you drop weak yet good flow all fitted in very well

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
^rofl...good opener
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
lol quite funny...shud have wordd it better tho
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
meh...didnt feel this
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
rofl good
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser
didnt feel this)
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
meh............

ok you need to work on ya structure an make ya verse consistent seriously...king took this

vote king

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Damn Ko'ed him in bout a hour that was fast........

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