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NaRc-UzI 08-24-05 02:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Kwar N. Teen
 
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Lay-z 08-24-05 09:04 PM

Voted For: Brandon

lines were stretched but were still good, better overall verse.........

icy-hot 08-24-05 11:41 PM

This was feedback posted for Kwar N. Teen
 
just check'in polls.....................................

S.P. 08-25-05 08:34 PM

Voted For: Kwar N. Teen

I give this shit to Kwar cuz His shit was hat and His puches was way hottersmoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?
press ya flesh, leave ya 'lines shook' like 'mistakes on an etch a sketch'.
i flex the wess, battlin K? i thought 'brand (k)new' i was 'fresh to death'..
This shit killed B
Ayo B"s shit was mad childish yoo wit all the faggot and Gay talkin shit

!x.c.c.x! 09-03-05 03:55 PM

Voted For: Kwar N. Teen

i dont wanna vote on this cuz both of u actuly aimed a punch at yoruself

but im gonna vote for this guy cuz most of his punches were toward him and came a little harder.....not much in it

Deranged 09-06-05 01:45 AM

Voted For: Kwar N. Teen

smoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?
5...ok
press ya flesh, leave ya 'lines shook' like 'mistakes on an etch a sketch'.
i flex the wess, battlin K? i thought 'brand (k)new' i was 'fresh to death'..
4...ok....nothing spectacular or nutin
i'll make ya chestless, i 'stole ya shine' - might as well 'take ya necklace'.
cause fuck effort!.. i could 'eat bran half asleep' like 'flakes for breakfast'..
6.......good
no one cops ya trash, hesitate to shoot N trust - i react and pop ya fast.
stop, ya trash! see 'don-key whack', that explains why ya 'drops are ass'..
6....good..

You changed the rules when you set it....well then I guess you're gay...
If you ate cereal it would be the only time you'd be Special......K?...
6.....so many cereal lines ...but ite..
You stink bad and ya verses are more ass...so that's what the stench is...
I would pitch you an idea...but you would need a baseball to catch it...
3...no...
2 days...fuck that...I will just end you now...cuz we all know this fella is swept...
If directions told faggotness....right being Straight....then he's left...
2...WTF?...basic punch...no
You could spit a good verse....but you might as well not even try this...
I'll Kwar N Teen this bitch...like I'm Spam Blocker and he was a virus
4....no..

Kwarnteen got this shit for harder hittin punches n shit.bradon had some lines..that flat out suked...like the direction/left one.So..yea

Vote-Kwar.n.teen
RTF IN SIG>


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