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Day 1
21st August 2005 18:35 ----------------------------------- Man im talkin to too many ppl on aim Second freestyle of the day...part 3 ---------------------------------------------------- (Change of Style) ........motors torqued goin Zero-to-Sixty, 'midas repaired ' so its a 'Hero-Wit-Quik-Feet'; as the innocent girl's Fear-Blows-In-Tripped-Heat... ........Drivers visions soon are Addin-In-Numbers, Splatted-N-Cumbered...cuz like 'psychopaths in comas' their deaths gonna be 'Padded-In-Slumber!!'... .......Speedin mass units Criss-Crossin-Traffic, Switch-Crossings'-Graphic as their fender meets da rail, 'dentin in faster' then a 'Bitch-Flossin-Plastic!!'... ......Flyin in oblivion over Massive-Cliffs, they Wrapped-N-Stiff...shocked at their 'motionless death' like they still 'Trapped-In-Midst'... ---------------------------------------------------- Man this automated reply is annoying me Pz .....1 |
yea good drop.....
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Day 1
21st August 2005 18:48 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
Day 1
21st August 2005 20:19 ----------------------------------- second freestyle of the day part 4.? lol i forgot *mental note dont foget* ------------------------------------- Deaths Discretely Smiles At Innocence Lost.................. .......Car breachin the earth sendin MASSIVE-SHOCKWAVES sufferin a tortrous death cuz its a PASSIVE-BLOCKED-GRAVE!!..... .......The gas tank EXPLODES-ON-IMPACT as the interior IMPLODES-N-TWISTS-BACKS and flings them BESTOWED-WIT-WRISTS-SNAPPED.... .......Shards of glass rip sockets and EMBEDS-THEIR-THOUGHTS, INSTEAD-IT-PLOTS to shatter dentals and SKIN-HEADS-WITH-ROCKS.... ......Jutted and spines cracked, their NECKS-SNAP-AND-CRUMBLE as the car's DECK-FLAPS-AND-FUMBLES and clasps, so their CHEST-CHAPS-AND-STUMBLES... .......Death laughs at them, with his lucid KNIFE-IN-THE-DASH gettin ready to take more innocence...another LIFE-IN-A-FLASH!!....... -------------------------------------------------------------- *mental note-do collab bout love* |
very good dairy
u r very imagery and da ideas was good u had a good vocabulary but half da word i didnt know wat they mean overall 9/10 |
Day 1
21st August 2005 20:35 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
Day 1
21st August 2005 21:27 --------------------------------- Meh im soooooo fuckin bored holla at me for a collab:thumbup: A Nerds Perspective ------------------------------------------------- Mother used to say.."I doubted that you would live".. cos she didn't have to push..I walked out of the uterus.. vitamin sizes are to big..so my vitals are obscene.. you think it's a coincidence all my idols are obese..?.. my body's a laugh..anorexics view me as a gentleman.. but in biogoly class..teachers use me as the skeleton.. gravity?..in basketball I WISH I could land like another.. because whenever I jump..I always land like a feather.. I used to work at a circus..as the nerd never nervous.. tight ropes?..big deal...endless turf when I worked it.. I have a passion to one stab some phatty asses.. and when I do..I'm gonna lube my shaft with fatty acids.. even simple cliches have been to known to get me prude.. like when I run..I hear "I have a bone to pick with you".. a T-Bone is finger food when made for this fellow.. who needs knives..when I can cut steaks with my elbow..?.. I never date a billiards due to dudes who are foolish.. who swear it's funny..to have me used as a poolstick.. and I'm burly so I'm sending all girls in a fit of awe.. cuz I'm stunning in the gym when I'm curling a sishkabob.. but now I'm swollen..so cats can never offend me.. because last week..I boasted a max of negative 50.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *mental note-stop being weird * *mental note-collab wid yvonne* Pz ..............1 --------------------------------------------------------- |
Day 2
22nd August 2005 11:16 ------------------------------------------ i promised ya chapter 2 so here we go Satanic Chapter Chapter.2 -------------------------------------------------- Murdered Babies... ..I Sit In This Woman...Considerin' Vile Speciment Of Her Fetus On The Outside, Crying.. All Hope For My Survival Seems To Leave Us.. ..No Longer Clingin Hope To Join And Be Apeart Of This World Of The Living Pull Into The Abortion Clinic Its Evident That I'll Die In This Prision... ...As Time Passes The Operation Is Preformed And I Fail To Death Wit This Failure Of A Mother Who Kill Her Own Son Before He Exhaled A Breath... ...Victim Of Abortion Clinics..A Supposed Catholic Girl Kills Her Baby Without Repentence As She Goes To Live Her Daily Life, Not Even Acknowledging My Existence.. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- pz......1 ----------------------------------------------------------------- |
Day 3
23rd August 2005 15:08 --------------------------------------- sory bout yestaday was out Satanic Chapters Part 3 ------------------------------ A Rapist.............................. ...I Wait For The Moment, My Mind States Drifts Off Steadily Breathing Heavily, Stand Cautiously In The Shadows, Waiting Readily ...Then The Moment Came, Slender Blonde Hair, Plush Breasts Fitted Snuggly In Her Bra Seemingly The Moments Passed Quickly, Checking The Surrondin To Ensure No One Saw ...And Without A Flaw, I Accended From The Shadows With One Blow To Her Temple Sexy Dimples, Her Limp Body Lay On The Ground, Breathin Softly I Fondle Her Nipples ...Lips Cold, As She Slowly Stirs To Reality, No Skirt Bare Nude I Was Deeply In It One Move And Yur Dead Cunt! My Voice Struck Fear And She Put Up No Resistence ...Without Repentance, As I Reach For The Rusty Blade In My Back Pocket Yeah Love Kills Strike Her Abodomen Reapedly, And Slowly Drift Away As The Blood Spills |
Day 4
24th August 2005 16:10 ------------------------------------------------------ Satanic chapters the last part ok gonna do a freestyle later ---------------------------------------------- Man On Death Row ...Facing The Judges Anxiously Yet Nervously Waiting On This Scentence Rape, Murder, Guilty On All Charges, Pain To The Victim Yes Its A Fact The Sent This ...My Mind Drifts Back In A Flash Back Of The When I Let Bullets Fly N Fill Ya Chest Streets Were Still A Mess, Didnt Care, Attempted To Burn Evidence Yet Police Smelt The Meltin Flesh ...To This Day I Still Cared Less, My Drifts To Insanity Came Back Instnatly As I Picture The Time I Stopped Ya Breath As I Viciously Raped Yu Then Chopped Ya Neck, And Spit In Your Mom's Face When She Asked Why I Caused Ya Death ...But Now My Tone Differs, As Im Brought Into This Metalliac Chambers, One Wooden Chair My Cold Dead Stare, Grim Smile, Im About To Meet Lord Jesus, And Yu'd Think I'd Care ...Yet Even Tho, As Demons Scribe Verses In The Epics Of These Satanic Chapters On How The World Lost Me Insanly Laughed And Before They Stopped Me, 1000 Volts Surged And Melted Skin Off Of My Body. FUCK!! -------------------------------------- pz 1 |
word up duke i like ur style u got alot of good imagery, structure, multi'z & organization of material overall good shit keep writing fa sho ight & yea peep out my diary when u get a chance
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Damn...hella nice shit...you're bored a lot aren't you?
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Day ...9
29th August 09:08 ----------------------- aight am gonna put some stuff ni today jus bear wid me |
Day 9
29th August 2005 13:02 --------------------------------------- umm thing i jus wrote lol -------------------------------------- seems like y'all got narcalypse, i'm not one to underestimate// sleep on me & catch a rude awakenin', be atcha wake// load up the Clipse, "I'm Serious", don't fuck wit my cake// get sprayed like Mase, make ya "Breathe Stretch & Shake"// i got the Eagle & you can get carried away on a stretcher// so when i flip the bird, it's more than a obscene gesture// don't come at me sideways. i'm the wrong one// have ya heart racin' to the flatline in the long run// i ain't afraid ta put ya heart in the street, so don't push me// i'm like a Gynecologist, i keep seein' you pussies// frontin' like you tough cuz you stole a car or two// but the burner'll cook ya ribs like a Barbecue... -------------------------------------------------- wurdnezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
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