once again uppin my shit cuz no one peeps my work....

wtf?


u got that name from rappin didnt u?

cause every time u spit some shit people said nigga please


elevate 2/10 or pick a different topic

iight dog, i asked for feedback not fucking beef....get the fuck outa here wit that shit.....fucking leave proper feed back or go fiddle wit ya lil dick.

heres some fuckin feed back u fuckin bitch


1.change ya fuckin font size
2.actually know what your tryna rap about
3.dont bitch when people telll u to elevate
4.go get some pussy then re write this
5.use the words in the right context

well now i wont bitch, cuz if you gon tell me to elevate tell me what to elevate on which you didnt do the first time....thats all i ask for.....

lol...E looch...aint seen ya for sometime now...

niggaplease just take his advice cos i think he prolly one of the few u cud turn to for lessons...

nice try to ur piece tho..

holla at mine(sig)....thanx

^^iight good looks

uppin?..........

was deffinetly a different peice lol. made me laugh in parts. was iiight u shoudl pick better more harder topics to rhyme about though. but nice for what u aimed for.

lol thanks man^^

dog i was feeling that .................some really funny shit......that she tried to kiss me had me rolling about...
hounestly this was nice....
good idea...(even if it is used alot)...
flow was xellent....
could of done with being a lil bit longer though......
8nahalf outta 10 .......

thanks man much appreciate it...........