Dope intro~i enjoyed it, nice beat too..good flow,your on beat, i think you could pronounce your words more and raise the vocals a little,but you have nice mic presence and a nice voice. Good track, keep dropping.1

Thanks man... I appreciate it very much......

Yeah its a Nas Beat produced by Alchemist called Book of Rhymes

intro is dope... waaay too long though you shuuda had it bout 10 secs its till goin on.. deffo shorten it, am losing interest now.....

iite here we go.. beat is kool. vocals are low. hard to hear you. quality is better though. emotion is iite could be better. flow needs a bit of work as does your breath controllit really sounds like your whispering...

up your vocals and emotion, work on your delivery and flow.

then se how good you are. good job though... pretty decent. better than your others

Thanks man.............

I think the intro's mos def dope,
Yeah i love this beat, shame the original is fucking ill though
Ur version
U def improved ur flow has def improved theres not as many stops in it anymore
Still need to work on ur delivery hit them words on the snare ya kno?
quality is ALOT better
Lyrics is coo as usual
A nice listen
Im gonna be honest wiv ya holmz
when ya 1st started out ya shit wasnt that good but uve gradually got better and better and i really enjoyed the listen
props homie

Thanks alot man.............

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Listenin'...

Damn...nice singing...mos def dope intro...long as hell but Im not complaining...

Beat kicks in...decent...first verse comes in...nice flow first line and then it falls off...it sounds like you rushed as hell...you need to have more breath control, but no worries I use to have the same problem...Hook is decent...keep it up man, you'll get it...

thanks alot........up.......