This was feedback posted for fraud
 

nice verse i think you got this hands down......................

^^ u should of voted maybe then u would of help out my situation then

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

fraud

Fuck a 6, u get-a-four-fith n I spit-a-whole-clip… then ‘SHOVE-L’s(shovels) like wat u use to ‘dig-a-hole-with’…
^nice wordplay in opener but no real punch actually 6/10

I’m killin-him, this is a ‘crime’, but u already know that I sin-hard…
so after this murder, R.V police i'll ‘put me in a CELL’ like ya ‘sim-card’…
^again dope wordplay but you didn't bring your opponent down 6/10

This is easy, nigga I retire-the-barriers… Who want it? I’m givin this kid his ‘NEXT-L’(Nextel) like the ‘WireLess-Carrier’!
^again dope wordplay in closer 7/10

Total: 19/30 = 63%, got the wordplay down but need more hardhitting punches


KhAoZ ThEoRy

Dude, take notes from your sig, Its YOUR Rhymes that are a Fraud
Only time you in control of a win....is if you was workin a Scoreboard
^hehe, nice opener, cool punch 8/10

Dear lord....Please dont hate him cause he ugly, an bless him with skill...
You could become a sucide bomber, an you still wont be ''built for the kill''
^lmao, nice wordplay right here 9/10

I'm at the top of the hill, your trynna Re-up from Rock Bottom...
Too end herbs like you I flatline...........Or in other words, I DOT-EM..........................................
^aight wordplay, not very hardhitting though but still cool 6/10

Total: 23/30 = 77%, last bar could've been better, nice overall though

Link is in my sig...

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Fraud had some mad stretched stuff, you need to work on your wording and structure for sure. Your wordplay was alright, wasn't anything special, reasonably creative, but a bit simple. Just an average verse.

Khaoz, I really liked the first punch, good creativity and worded well. Suicide bomber was decent, but nothing more, and the flatline was overly complex, didn't make much sense to me but you still took this battle relatively easily.

v/ Khaoz Theory