Voted For: hotshh!

Narc..... opener was bad, seen way to many "hot"-"shh" lines used against him, ya verse was structured good and it flowed good... the punches were decent, could of been much better, good conecpts and vocab but they were lacking in the "hard hit category", your closer was pretty good but its kinda self-glory saying that your better than TE

hotshh!.... damn! your verse was on fire!, was full of wordplay!, structure and flow were good, opener was hot!... your punches were nice and hard, hahahaha closer.. funny as hell! very good verse here.... gets my vote

vote: hotshh!

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Hotshh! took it...

Checking them polls though, good verse from Narc as well...

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I would vote...but I think Narc might take it as hate....

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word, i was up in the city for the week, missed this i guess.......word up hotshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhizzle

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Voted For: hotshh!

Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy
See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up

^^^ good fuckin punches cuz of the name plays and the flip off his avy... all actually good punches except the two bars i left out. whish i didn't like.
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You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep
^^^almost a good punch if u woulda played of slimmer by sayin sumin about anarexia or sumin, but the way u compared cars didn't make it hit.
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and also u had some lines i've seen before like that open mind line i saw last week on RB and it was played then too. and also i saw that no fare line i saw last year in the kll here. so i gotta be votin hotshh for comin more original and havin good nameplays with punches...
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PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR MY BATTLE BEEN UP FOR EVER!!! link is in my sig agianst mr. lyricist

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

my vote is for narc-uzi

Structure-Narc-uzi's structure was better, had good flow...it was obvious...narc-uzis lines matched up every line.....hotshh ur verse was not that well structurized.....up on that

Personals-Both had good persoansl but hotshh's personals were more plain too see and harder hitting narc-uzi's personals were not as appealing to the eye

Punches-I felt that narc-uzi's punches were harder hitting and more comedic......meaning the reader was appealed to them......hotshh had top punches also but fell short to narc-uzi

Multis-Niether really had any good multis that effected there versee...both up on ya multis in ur verse.....so tie in this catergorie

Vocab-Biggest word in this battle was gymnastics.....so again neither can be voted on this catergorie....both up on your vocab.....

Originality-I felt both verses were fresh and original but again its the readers opinion to whose is better and in my eye its narc-uzi's i felt his punches were more dominant that hotshh so

v/narc-uzi

rtf if you want on my battle vs. mizz fyre