Voted For: Intermental
Ok Will a peer This is a good beat = chorus wise i feel u rode it well but no real content O i feeling ya flow ma definetly only one problem. you sound like a pre-pubescent boy Punches were ehh..they ight nothing really stand out though Felt u needed to up ur vocal's was hard to hear at certain points Delivery was coo' overall a decent diss track especialy for ur 1st VS inter = Well 1st of all ight intro def feeling the beat Vocals needed to be turned up a little Punches def the strong point of ur verse some good personals and the kitchen line ha! Quality is def coo Lmfao at robbin oxfam Delivery and flow is coo' falls of a lil but for most part it cool actually flow is all coo' just need to sound more confident in urself Well i gotta give this to Intermental both had same delivery will's punches were ehh where inters had me rollin a few times flow was dope by will and coo by inter but i felt inter just edged this out |
Voted For: Intermental
v/Inter by listen to the songs i could hear that Inter had a lot hard and more punches.... The beat ok quality is aight Willa u might have won this if you would have had some hard personals and dont talk about Tony Green when u battling Inter....unlucky:) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Intermental
god damns will a peers chorus is annoying!!!! ahhh its wack lol, but ur flow is cool tho, voice is so so, i aint feeling it, lol at inters intro, but blah i wasint really feeling it dawg, beat is awsome, lmfao at your first line,man u really got better than before, this your best battles seriously, watch ur flow tho man, cuz one time u really fell off, i dunno bout will a peers diss, it was good but didnt have good punchlines like intermental vote: Intermental no hate only an honest voter Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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not gonna vote. just gonna listen to the tracks and look around a bit.
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man, this guy sounded liek a closet fruit in that intro, lol. How the fuck you gonna tlak dirty TO YOUR SELF!! man I gotta smh at BOTH these tracks lol, one guy is textcee to DEATH and the other is textee half to death. Both yall have quality issues like woah and that's the tip of the iceburg.
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wooooooo what harlem shake ure ass outta this thread
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Suck a dick faggot....this is not a hate thread this is listenin give sum real feedback and not hum half minded child like bitch made shit.........23 year old writin like a damn pre school nigga...man check yo self |
Voted For: will appear
Intermental i like your voice, but its true what willa said your intro and outro put together are longer then your verse, maybe you should just have less of a intro cuz i hate waiting for intro then the verse i wanna hear the verse first so maybe you could have a killa outro next time, and its also true how you had no personals, i didnt even realize any creative metaphors in there, flow aint bad but you could use emotion more. Willa i think you'd sound very good on a smoother beat, but yea its a battle but theres a advantage a gurl could have on a guy in a battle lol, i love your little hook the lil trigga town thing nice lil meta in that, but the verse was good to nice flow you had some pops in ya quality though, emotion was pretty could keep workin on it though, but overall i just think yours was more appealing and funnier ahha, and you we're more creative with lyrics. |
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that is my feedback you cocktoucher. You mad that I didn'thave anyhing good to say? That's cuz I didn't hear anything good worth saying. Cry about it you wack-ass shitbag. If you feel tough enough, shit man, just go set-up a battle and we'll rock out. DONE DEAL!! |
Voted For: will appear
wasnt really feeling either verse. but seems like willa had better flow...interm u had punches but i wasnt really feelin them..they seemed more like old school jokes you decided to use for punches...willa had personal punches and better flow which is why she gets my vote. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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